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October 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Heyo, just wanted to let you know that I really, really love The Sentimental Feelings. I hope you find the inspiration to go on with this story. I know it's been over 3 years since the last chapter came out, but still, I want to know how it goes on.
Greatings,
a big fan of yours.
Greatings,
a big fan of yours.
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October 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's an interesting and amusing concept, turning Albel into a chibi. Unfortunately I ended up skimming and skipping due to all the grammar mistakes. It was very hard to comprehend what you were trying to say in many of your sentences.
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September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I decided to check back on this story on a whim and was so happy to see that you updated it. The new chapter was great. I enjoy the internal/emotional conflict that the characters are going through and how its developing. Can't wait to see where it all leads. Keep up the great work!
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July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow I hope I'm not getting confused. I haven't been able to access ADFF in such a long time....due to computer problems so I'm not sure if it is a newer chapter or that I just can't remember right. ^^; I hope I'm not embarrassing myself. Sorry it's just, I've been such a space case lately... umm ANYWAY! chapter 14 was amazing, and great use of repetition! It was so cleaver--I probably sound like an English teacher saying so x.x I hope theirs another update soon. btw nice use of Taroh cards.
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May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story, however from reading the first chapter, you really need a Beta reader. You miss words like "the, to, it, you, etc" repeatedly. I recommend you go through and reread your work.
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December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please keep going. i love this story.
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i've been reading this fic since it was first posted, and fell in love with it. please continue it dsoon.
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October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you're back. I'm so happy to see this fic getting continued. It's defenantly the best one in this section so keep up the good work!
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so sweet and angsty and very thought provoking! I love reading your story. It's romantic and philosophical and it feels so enlightening to read it! I can hardly wait for the next update~ But I shall be patient! It'll be worth the wait!
The way you portray these characters is both mostly accurate and very endearing. I'm loving them more and more with every word I read.
The way you portray these characters is both mostly accurate and very endearing. I'm loving them more and more with every word I read.
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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you're updating the story again! After reading this lastest chapter, which was lovely btw, I want to read everything all over again. I forgot how much I truely enjoyed your writing. I'm not a writer myself by any means so I can't even begin to understand how you are able to put together such a beautiful story. I love your take on everything. I'm so happy the story is going to continue. And please do not feel bad about the long break or taking your time to write the chapters. Your fantastic writing is always worth the wait!