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April 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Even with AFF being a royal retard, you guys have come back with even more wonderful chapters. Now to note on the most recent one...
Holy hell in a handbasket, Amy with a gun! As if her wielding a giant hammer wasn't deadly enough? What would her parents say? Haha, probably would be cheering her on at that moment. Well, up until the moment she got shot at. It's like you said, the ultimate shit hit the ultimate fan.
Kudos on the cliffhanger. It certainly is making me think of all the possibilites that may occur. Cant wait for the next chapter guys ^_^
Oh, and finally (no thanks to AFF bitch fest and college crap) I got my story up, titled Crimson Twilight. I'd be honored if ya checked it out some time!
Keep up the killer work and keep us guessing.
Your fan,
Dark Angel Murdoc
Holy hell in a handbasket, Amy with a gun! As if her wielding a giant hammer wasn't deadly enough? What would her parents say? Haha, probably would be cheering her on at that moment. Well, up until the moment she got shot at. It's like you said, the ultimate shit hit the ultimate fan.
Kudos on the cliffhanger. It certainly is making me think of all the possibilites that may occur. Cant wait for the next chapter guys ^_^
Oh, and finally (no thanks to AFF bitch fest and college crap) I got my story up, titled Crimson Twilight. I'd be honored if ya checked it out some time!
Keep up the killer work and keep us guessing.
Your fan,
Dark Angel Murdoc
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April 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now that I'm done being lazy...
The colonel has proved to be an interesting man, as well as a sadist. Wooden Spoon.
The only grey area thats bugging me is that paticular scientist who was humane to Shadow durring the beginning of his private hell.
Hedgecat? ... nope...nothing real intelligent to say here...mabey later.
Found myslef laughing when Amy got her hands on a gun. Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.
Since I'm too tired to say anything intelligent, I'll take my leave.
Respectfully yours;
AntwerpsRule
The colonel has proved to be an interesting man, as well as a sadist. Wooden Spoon.
The only grey area thats bugging me is that paticular scientist who was humane to Shadow durring the beginning of his private hell.
Hedgecat? ... nope...nothing real intelligent to say here...mabey later.
Found myslef laughing when Amy got her hands on a gun. Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.
Since I'm too tired to say anything intelligent, I'll take my leave.
Respectfully yours;
AntwerpsRule
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April 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. Only one thing bothers me: In the last chapter, Sonic seemed to be in a very sickly manner, but in this chapter he seems perfectly fine. Is he ok now?
Other than that this was a fun chapter. I enjoyed seing Sonic begin to get on somewhat better terms with Amy after the rape. It's nice to see that you did some research on Military Customs and applied it to this chapter. It's sad to see Shadow so strung out that he can barely even remember who Amy is. I look forward to the next installment.
Other than that this was a fun chapter. I enjoyed seing Sonic begin to get on somewhat better terms with Amy after the rape. It's nice to see that you did some research on Military Customs and applied it to this chapter. It's sad to see Shadow so strung out that he can barely even remember who Amy is. I look forward to the next installment.
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April 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Most interesting.
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April 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Wonder how much longer before Shadow unleashs his mass-wrath upon those bastards.. He's gotta be able to do something after so long. I also wonder whats wrong with Sonic..
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April 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, It's good to see a piece of fan fiction that wasn't written by a three year-old with hormonal problems. I also like the fact that you two build up an interesting narrative, rather than a piece of shit plot with lots of sex. And it's probably inappropriate as hell, but that part where Shadow was anally raping Amy reminded me of a funny YTMND: http://sonicgivesadviceonrape.ytmnsfw.com/
I do hope that all of this torture is leading to happier times and not leading to a Winston-Smithish-no-win-catch-22 situation where the character goes through a lot of torture and ends up getting killed in the end anyway. Can't wait for the future installments!
I do hope that all of this torture is leading to happier times and not leading to a Winston-Smithish-no-win-catch-22 situation where the character goes through a lot of torture and ends up getting killed in the end anyway. Can't wait for the future installments!