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Wow! Great chappie! I've actually been reading your story for a while now, but I never had an account on here until now. I decided that I should post a review on here, since I've been reading it a lot lately. I really love your story and I'm usually not a big Shadamy fan, or a SonRouge for that matter. I'll make an acception for this story though. The description and all the suspense is just too much to pass. I love reading this story no matter what. Even all the torture Shadow went through. Yeah... Shocking. But it's still good. Plus, everyone seems to want to torture Shadow anyway. I'm used to it by now.XD I still felt really bad for him though.:( But don't think I hate you. I trully love what you've come up with for this story and I can't wait to read more of it!:) It always interests me when fanfiction writers make up their own characters like Mirage and Ashura for instance. Oh... And lets not forget Eclipse.;) Anyway... I'd review more right now, but I can't help but read the next part of this story. I guess it would be the fourth story in this series. Wow... You sure wrote a lot so far. And there's more to come!^^ Yayz! Ahem... Anywho... I'll talk to ya later then. Keep up the awesome work!;) Bya!

This was great. I really love this series, and I'm glad you're continuing it. However, don't neglet your other stuff! Still looking forward to updates on the Backstabber universe and At the End of the Tunnel

That was a nice ending, Everything is starting to return to peace. Well, It least I hope. I can't wait to see what happens next so i'll be cheeking out part three now. Thanks for answering my review though, that ment a lot to me.

Good work! but you should really do better next time. I waited a whole week for this! the sex is good yes....but there was nothing creative in this chapter. Even ME! the stupid, annoying, uncreative funk man could have done something like this. Where's the good stuff that caught my attention before, this chapter wasn't that great! If you are going to make a third one, please, PLEASE, make it good, make me leave good reviews like before. You'll probably hate me after leaving a review like this but I'm just stating the facts, it's as simple as this, good chapter=good review from funk man.

Why do you do this?
It just doesn't make an sense.

As I was reading this chapter, it hit me like a rock. Why do you two work so hard and spend so much of your time on this wonderful story, even though it's only a small part of peoples lives? Sure it has a large hit count and it gets a few reviews everytime a chapters put up. But ones you think about it, people only treat it a small part of there life so they can enjoy themselfs for an amount of time. From what i've seen, you two seem to give your life in to writing this story and spend a huge amount of time just trying to update once a week, just to make them happy. Is this what it's like to care for something you believe in? I still have a lot to learn.

Rouge was very different, she thought of someone other then her self. Shadow and Amy were able to overcome the pain of losing everything they care about and now are starting over. Happy, As one. Is this what push's you to keep writing? the fact that even though everthings not what it seems, but there is love in the end? I'm sorry if i'm asking to much and it really is not my place to ask. But I feel that I should speak these anyway. I simile back knowing that even though I do not fully understand, but that a new beginning to a loving story is just over the hill.

HeartOfDarkness.

I really like the new chapter. You really get a sense through the writing and almost sink into the characters in this one as Shadow's pain builds. The 'final side-effect' being the tip of it where you feel released after he does. You don't know what will happen and it is much better that way. A nice touch as well to say it was near the end of the story as that set into motion thoughts that it could end with his offing. You can have an ARAAT3 without him. Just be harder and likely darker if possible. But for some reason...I don't see his troubles over quite yet. Call it a hunch with this series. :)

How the hell can you store the sheer amount of information present in the brain onto a DVD?!?!

Finally, the pain is hopefully over. I mean, the past I-don't-know-how-many chapters have been nothing but pain, pain, pain, and it eventually gets tiring. I didn't squirm, I just found myself yawning through some parts. If I want to squirm, I'll just look at a harlequin fetus or that wonderful image on cherrycake.org.

Don't have much to say for this week; hopefully next week will be a bit more of a fresh change.

Now this is more like it! Length, tenuosly romantic stuff, realism, and power! An excellant return to form, and I mean that. Now if only all the chapters were like that.

The big problem you seem to hve (well, had if it continues in this vein) is the chapters concentrated on one thing too much (one instance of Shadows symptoms for example. (chapter 16)), wheras this one stretched it out over a somewhat longer and wider variety of the symptoms. Keep it up, this is chapter is a good omen!

From how that is described, it sounds like a Chaos Blast. Does this mean he may soon also learn the Chaos Spear as well? If you've no idea what I am referring to.. go play Shadow The Hedgehog!

Yay. ^_^
Shadows feeling better now. Well, things seem to be getting better now but I have a feeling thats it has a long way too go.
I'm sure Eclipse will show up in the next chapter and I wonder how he's doing so far.
Anyway, very good chapter. I hope to see the last chapters soon before you move on with the next part. :)

HeartOfDarkness.