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for Forbidden Lust

by SilentSilhoutte

schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you like long reviews like I do, cause I want to draw this one out for a while! Great story, first-off. Really great! It was well-written, had just enough plot to keep me interested, and was very intelligently done. My hopes and dreams all died with Navi. T.T I love her, annoying as she may be. Umm... Oh, yeah! I found the whole thing a lot funnier than I ought to have. It shouldn't have been funny. But it was. Really funny. In particular 'The Ass of Link'. Something about that phrase just flows and makes me giggle. Finally, I greatly appreciate your ability to write with good grammar. I'm realizing more and more that that's a rarity anymore.

Five Stars!
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wheee! This was JUST what I was looking for!! So sexy and it actually had a plot too. That last line was so neat and so smugly matter-of-fact. Thank you so much, hope you write more smexy Link loving. By the way, your bio was really cool. Do you really go to Tokyo University? Email me so we can talk sometime(yours is hidden), read my stories while you're at it too please?. *mew* LONG LIVE THE YAOI AND YURI FAN-WRITER'S OF DOOM!!
person lil
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!

froma critical point of view though, i felt the end was a little short, even though you dont have to conclude about zelda and navi, it seemed teh sex scene went a lil fast

but 2 hours

wow


you write so well

WRITE MOREEEEEE
person Isaac Perez
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was absolutley perfecT!
person Link's Lover
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I LOVE this pairing! Link and Dark Link are sooo HOT together! I loved this fic! It made me cry when Navi died and when Link was being raped (So I was crying throught most of the fic)Keep writing! ^_~
person MissMurder111
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! i love it! that was hot! let me know when u decide to write more like that!
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wo0t Wo0t!!! Great pairing and description. This is my fav pairing in the game. I love the phase "frisky abandonment", its just so cute. Can you write another chapter? I wanna see what happens to Link, does he end up as Dark Link's pet?
P.S You spelled Navi's name as 'Nazi' in the third section.
person Raven
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
. . . I love you, please marry me .__. . . .
or I will have to kidnap you, tie you to a tre and make you write more =D
. . . . seriously .__.
person Kuni
schedule April 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it dark link seems alittle nice to Link any ways good jod the story looks great so far keep going. i'd like to read more. ^_^
person yako
schedule April 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...there will be next part, right? I wanna next part!!! XD