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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. that was intense!
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! that was funny! ha! ha! some parts at least. some intense situations comprised with out-of-nowhere humor had me on an endless roller coaster ride. i never expected a story like this and found it highly original and entertaining. i find myself eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I will try to make sure that dose...oh I mean DOES not happen with my spelling.
Last year I was worse but this year I have tried to improve, thanks for your honesty as it always helps.
Last year I was worse but this year I have tried to improve, thanks for your honesty as it always helps.
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still a great story even though I could not help but to notice a few spelling errors. Most of them was the word 'does' as you had spelled it 'dose', which is wrong. I'm not accusing you of being like BAD at spelling, but you should check the spelling more with computer programs and/or prereaders (which I would be more than happy to be) to avoid further errors. As I said; great story that is great with that last, LONG chapter. Keep up the good work and post soon again.
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June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No problem Anto
I am just in a very busy stage in my life but I will continue the story as soon as possible,
expect the third chapter in at the end of June or the start of July.
Just like Shigeru Miyamoto, a delayed story has a chance to be better, a bad story is bad for life.
That is why I am not rushing things but I plan to have this beauty finnished with up to at least 8 chapters at the end of the year, just when Twilight Princess comes out for the Cube and Wii.
Thanks for you review.
I want this one to be my best.
While I am writing this, check out some of my other stories here or go to www.qslo.org where I have more stories and stuff there.
It is a site dedicated to quicksand perils so this is where most of my stuff it always up to date.
I am just in a very busy stage in my life but I will continue the story as soon as possible,
expect the third chapter in at the end of June or the start of July.
Just like Shigeru Miyamoto, a delayed story has a chance to be better, a bad story is bad for life.
That is why I am not rushing things but I plan to have this beauty finnished with up to at least 8 chapters at the end of the year, just when Twilight Princess comes out for the Cube and Wii.
Thanks for you review.
I want this one to be my best.
While I am writing this, check out some of my other stories here or go to www.qslo.org where I have more stories and stuff there.
It is a site dedicated to quicksand perils so this is where most of my stuff it always up to date.
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June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was pretty freakin' good! I love the games and all that and this story is just too good! Please don't tease the readers but post the new chapters ASAP. Keep up the good work!
/antoniusan
/antoniusan