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January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well im not great at reviewing but i like your stories hell the quicksand ones are sometimes funny and sometimes tragic its not that im afraid what anybody thinks of what i read and honestly i dont care. Besides i just got back from an illness and im going back to working on my fanfiction as soon as possible this story i give a 4\5 the one in the pokemon section in anume with ash and misty looking for the mew i give a five out of five any other ones ill try and review there when i get more time untell then have fun pissing people off as much as i like to hear em whine XD
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January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whos your fuckin daddy. Im not afraid to use my real name because i know dumb shits like lance are not going to do a god damn thing. I do like TBT's stories and as ive mentioned above this IS my real name shit talk me all you wan anon fagit's but when it comes down to it i would kill you fuckers before you even came 500 yards of my house oh and by the was xain is my brother and im REALLY loving it when people shit talk his writing you know what? He writes that in 5 minutes alright hes not even trying to create a good story if he wanted to make one he would take at least an hour to do so. Really come now to bad you sorry anon fucks cant post reviews now because the system admins got pissed off at you oh and to any admin reading this... I dont care if you ban my NAME from the site just dont touch xain he has nothing to do with this this is my own rant and your GOD DAMN LUCKY im not foamy or i could go on forever about how retarded this shit is getter. And tbone that E-Mail you sent xain helped him out a bit i thank you for that man un tell later im out
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January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i meant getting pardon my typing <_< (better at freaking writing at least i can see if i made anymistakes!)
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January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
last thing the only reason you see spelling errors on my rants is because i cant look at the screen while typing (even though i type 70 words per minute) anyway thats all i gotta say about this hope you have fun and hope all anon's rot in hell have a nice fucking day.
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I'd stepped away because as soon as I read "Now I'm just posting as Anon to annoy you," I realized it was going to be a while until you started to act mature enough to just listen to other people...however, you stunned me by calming down entirely and apologizing. Your apology to me is accepted.
So, everyone cool now?
So, everyone cool now?
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey...I'd like to apologize fully for everything, Tony. I was...quite pissed off and needed to vent it someplace... you just happened to be the target for my venting. Well, anyway, sorry again, for everything, and you do indeed have the right to write about whatever you want.
Just...make sure you give proper warning about it and post it where there is likely to not be people who are assholes all the time and not just when they're mad. So yea, keep writing your uh...your stuff and try to tone down on the sex in it. Seriously, if I can give you one little tip to improve, get off the topic of sex in basically every one of your stories. Really now, they don't ALL it.
Just...make sure you give proper warning about it and post it where there is likely to not be people who are assholes all the time and not just when they're mad. So yea, keep writing your uh...your stuff and try to tone down on the sex in it. Seriously, if I can give you one little tip to improve, get off the topic of sex in basically every one of your stories. Really now, they don't ALL it.
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well...I apreciate that you said Sorry to me Anon...but still some of your words have hurt.
But yours were not the only ones.
Many people from what they had done and said to me on my reviews did make me feel like no matter what I said, it only makes things worse.
I know what I do have is not something that is unique.
Everyone has a sexual fantasy in some shape or form. But it does not mean that it is a reflection of what they really do.
I just try to use my interests in my stories because I know it is healthy for me.
And no...I don't need help on it.
I just write the stories on the sites that cater to that sort of interest and even Adultfanfiction.net caters to anything that is sexual.
Perhaps I was wrong about the usual fanfiction.net, but it was one of the first sites I first leaarned about storywriting based on characters from anything from TV, Books and Videogames and even they have their shair of fettises like bondage and other things.
Many of wich I have no interst in but I do respect their interests of writing style.
So please...if you find yourself in a position where you need to criticise someone because of what they write about, walk a mile in their shoes.
Therefore, you will be a mile away, and you will have their shoes.
lol
TBone Tony
But yours were not the only ones.
Many people from what they had done and said to me on my reviews did make me feel like no matter what I said, it only makes things worse.
I know what I do have is not something that is unique.
Everyone has a sexual fantasy in some shape or form. But it does not mean that it is a reflection of what they really do.
I just try to use my interests in my stories because I know it is healthy for me.
And no...I don't need help on it.
I just write the stories on the sites that cater to that sort of interest and even Adultfanfiction.net caters to anything that is sexual.
Perhaps I was wrong about the usual fanfiction.net, but it was one of the first sites I first leaarned about storywriting based on characters from anything from TV, Books and Videogames and even they have their shair of fettises like bondage and other things.
Many of wich I have no interst in but I do respect their interests of writing style.
So please...if you find yourself in a position where you need to criticise someone because of what they write about, walk a mile in their shoes.
Therefore, you will be a mile away, and you will have their shoes.
lol
TBone Tony
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm only using 'anon' now because it seems to annoy you so much...grow up.
What I'm trying to get across to you, Tony, is that I have no problem with different religions or cultures etc. You can all do your own thing there. What I do have a problem with, are sick sexual fetishes which really have no connection to race and/or religion, and people who try to make said nonexistent connections. Your arguments sound like a 3rd grader's in any case. But to the point now, I seriously just wish maybe you could explain why the hell seeing someone, namely a nude woman, getting eaten alive turns you on? It really just does not seem physically possible, unless you find yourself somehow imagining the victim is your penis and whatever eating it is a vagina. If that's the case, you really do need help.
Truly though, what I hate most about what you say is that you claim to have a unique writing 'style'. To put it politely, stop lieing to yourself. At least read your work outloud if you're going to keep writing anyway...perhaps then you might catch how half of what is in your stories could be outdone by a tub full of shit.
What I'm trying to get across to you, Tony, is that I have no problem with different religions or cultures etc. You can all do your own thing there. What I do have a problem with, are sick sexual fetishes which really have no connection to race and/or religion, and people who try to make said nonexistent connections. Your arguments sound like a 3rd grader's in any case. But to the point now, I seriously just wish maybe you could explain why the hell seeing someone, namely a nude woman, getting eaten alive turns you on? It really just does not seem physically possible, unless you find yourself somehow imagining the victim is your penis and whatever eating it is a vagina. If that's the case, you really do need help.
Truly though, what I hate most about what you say is that you claim to have a unique writing 'style'. To put it politely, stop lieing to yourself. At least read your work outloud if you're going to keep writing anyway...perhaps then you might catch how half of what is in your stories could be outdone by a tub full of shit.
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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow Enigma...you got racism from that...wow. Here's the thing then: I take almost sadistic pleasure in treating those who like sickening things such as...vore, feel like crap. I admit, its a real problem but I just can't help myself...but alas, you fuel the fires... But in any case I owe you, Enigma, and TBoneTony, an apology. So, sorry.
But you're still a sick bastard and a crappy writer TBoneTony.
But you're still a sick bastard and a crappy writer TBoneTony.
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
[quote]Or was that another "anon." There seems to be a bunch of you little shits who don't have the balls to actually use your pen-name when you write these reviews.[/quote]
Alright, Mr Lance. You see that, there? That effectively nullifies your accusations that I am a dumbass for thinking there is only one "anon." I am MORE than aware of what it is short for, which is exactly the reason I get as annoyed as I do when I see someone with that name; because what exactly are you trying to hide? This is the internet, of all things; practically nothing that happens negatively to people across it in these little bouts of net-drama ever affects somebody in real life, so if you have the gonads to tell someone they suck, why not have the gonads to say "oh, and by the way, this is my name, fucknugget, so bring it!" Or even a pen name, at least. I digress.
No, I do not find vore to be sickening. Why? Because I ignore it. I simply do not understand it, therefore, I have no interest. I do not intentionally seek out things that disturb me and rail against them. Vore is strange as hell, yes. But it's also something that interests and arouses others. Why should I attack them for their interests? It's not gonna change them nor is it going to change anybody else, it's just going to make me come off as a total asshole and a total dick. And what does that gain me? Enemies? I have enough of them as it is because of the fact that inevitably I find people like you, Lance, who want to try, however in vain it may be, to squash the fetishes or interests of others, and I get pissed because to try and crush someone's interests or fetishes or whatever is akin to oppression or suppression.
Yes, to the majority of people these days, to be interested in a woman getting eaten by quicksand or some monster is wierd and unacceptable in society. Yet, once, the thought of black people being free and equal as the rest of the US was considered socially unacceptable. Women having the ability to speak their minds and vote was considered socially unacceptable. I'm not saying vore will ever be socially unacceptable, but you never know, it might.
Narrow-mindedness is a sure route to self-destruction, my friend, and I'd advise on just accepting the beliefs of others as long as they're not harming anyone, rather than discriminating people on their interests; it's what I have done for the past 3 years and ever since I started I find myself at a much greater capacity for intellect than I had previously.
~LG Mills, aka The Enigma~
Alright, Mr Lance. You see that, there? That effectively nullifies your accusations that I am a dumbass for thinking there is only one "anon." I am MORE than aware of what it is short for, which is exactly the reason I get as annoyed as I do when I see someone with that name; because what exactly are you trying to hide? This is the internet, of all things; practically nothing that happens negatively to people across it in these little bouts of net-drama ever affects somebody in real life, so if you have the gonads to tell someone they suck, why not have the gonads to say "oh, and by the way, this is my name, fucknugget, so bring it!" Or even a pen name, at least. I digress.
No, I do not find vore to be sickening. Why? Because I ignore it. I simply do not understand it, therefore, I have no interest. I do not intentionally seek out things that disturb me and rail against them. Vore is strange as hell, yes. But it's also something that interests and arouses others. Why should I attack them for their interests? It's not gonna change them nor is it going to change anybody else, it's just going to make me come off as a total asshole and a total dick. And what does that gain me? Enemies? I have enough of them as it is because of the fact that inevitably I find people like you, Lance, who want to try, however in vain it may be, to squash the fetishes or interests of others, and I get pissed because to try and crush someone's interests or fetishes or whatever is akin to oppression or suppression.
Yes, to the majority of people these days, to be interested in a woman getting eaten by quicksand or some monster is wierd and unacceptable in society. Yet, once, the thought of black people being free and equal as the rest of the US was considered socially unacceptable. Women having the ability to speak their minds and vote was considered socially unacceptable. I'm not saying vore will ever be socially unacceptable, but you never know, it might.
Narrow-mindedness is a sure route to self-destruction, my friend, and I'd advise on just accepting the beliefs of others as long as they're not harming anyone, rather than discriminating people on their interests; it's what I have done for the past 3 years and ever since I started I find myself at a much greater capacity for intellect than I had previously.
~LG Mills, aka The Enigma~