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for Left Behind

by fazed

person MaddiChan
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I love Sora with Leon better though, because Cloud is annoying the shit out of me. "OMG, Aerith!" ::rolls eyes::
person Anon
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kairi calling Aerith a 'bitch' was the best moment in fanfiction history. She IS being a bitch. Actually--she's out of character to be honest, but who cares, cause I hate her ANYWAY so I'm happy she's being a bitch. I hope somebody snaps her like a twig. I love seeing Cloud and Leon fight over Sora, it's precious and Yuffie's reaction is great.

person Sekre
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAhahaha, Sora totally got himself screwed over xDDD But I'm agreeing with Yuffie - He should be happy to sleep with two hotties!!! lmao. Oh, and I thought Sephiroth was being noble in saving Sora - Naive little me. Hehe, great chapter! I love your story!
person Sekre
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
haha Leo cub xDD I wonder what Merlin has to say ... update soon!!
person Shiro_uzumaki
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
u make more Leon/Sora = Me VERY happy. Cloud = like an asshole so far, but still hot. Cloud/Sora = happy... Leon + Sora + Cloud....= Leon/Sora/Cloud LOVE!!!! Yummy...threesomes. Simple logic! Update!
person Jen
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i totally like your story. i feel so bad for sora. anyways, go with the 3-some (in my opinion).
person Anon
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it should definetly be Leon/Sora/Cloud!!!
there aren't enough Leon/Sora fics out there and this is a really great fic and you could really do some fun stuff with this threesome. love this fic. post next chap soon
person Sekre
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great fic!! Leon/Sora and Cloud/Sora is soooo hot! You should continue with both men -drools- Lovely fic, please update soon!
person Anon
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
{Review of Chapter 6}
OMG you are so evil, I *heart* you.
The forcing of Sora on Leon...brillant.
Oh and this makes me hate Aerith more!!!
Leon/Sora/Cloud...you need at least one scene with the three of them...preferably more though...
You should update soon! I want to know Leon's and Cloud's convo.
person PandaGirl
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You absolutely mustmustMUST make it a Leon/Sora/Cloud. Think of the drama! >w<

By the way, Left Behind is starting to round out quite nicely. This last chapter moved a bit fast, but I'm not asking you to go all Moby Dick on us either. That would be bad. Lyke, craazybad.
Keep up the good work.


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