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person J.Rolande

schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Hey, not bad. The characters come across nicely. Very few spelling or grammar errors to be seen, and the focus is on the characters' emotions rather than the lovemaking itself. Tastefully done. Nice work. ~J.

person Starfox fan

schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM

I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!!

PLEASE WRITE MORE LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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