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for The Beating of Wings

by WotanAnubis

person BookaG
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Baten Kaitos yuri! That's a gem, and I thank you for it. It was really sexy throughout, but what you did with the wings added another level to it. Made it feel really fresh, I guess. Loved the "noisy" comment. The sex scene wouldn't have been the same without it.
person Bishonen
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you write some really good yuri oh and could you cheeck out my story Motoko's quest and give a suggestion
With love; Imasuky Lomae