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Good God, man! How could you have let a story as good as this go so long without an update? There is a disappointing lack of KotOR 2 on this site. A.K.A. continue with that second chapter. Please.

Well given that you'll probably never update this again, I suppose that there's little reason for me to write this - still, I find your writing to be well done, and I've decided to urge you to write a few more chapters.

You most contiue this fic. it rocks. and there arnt enough kotor fics out there

Very interestubg stories. It would be unterrestung to see whgat kind of "punishment" the dark exile has in mind. That seeing what role Mira and possiblt Visas will play would be fun.

Very nice please update soon

You did very well with character portrayal here. Everyone behaves exactly as they should; I can definitely see both events happening - the only thing that threw it off for me was crude slang terms for body parts. I mean, when I see words I find more likely to hear from high school boys than from a romance novelist (with the exception of the characters themselves saying them, which I suppose could be excused here by first-person narration) it acts like a blast of cold water.

Maybe it's because I'm a girl, and I came here hoping vainly for Atton/Mical slash... but oh well. Damn, I wish someone would write that. I NEVER see it. And I won't write it myself, because it's one of my guiltier guilty pleasures... sigh.

Good good very good indeed. When this review was written there were only 2 kotor smut fanfics in the whole website.the author from this 1 leans on the more blowjob or handjob w/ facial. Which i find very sexy imo.my point is. It is rare to find someone who finds cumshot fetishes sexy, and the fact a the author wrote one including them,(even more which its blue twileks which is like the biggest bonus in the world)makes the first chapter godly and the second chapter semi godly. My point in case is The More you make. the more will come..................(wink)

Yes !! I loved KotOR II, played it 6 times, and few things got me hotter than those three girls, Visas most of all, but Handmaiden giving herself to you, half naked, never failed to get me off. Please continue this story ! It's well worth detailing, you have a very good grasp of it and are the ONLY author i've seen in much searching with talent and a desire to write about this game and its incredible women (who are far better than any Lucas dreamed up)

Moooorreeeee ! :D

I look forwad to more chapters. Don't kill the Handmaiden, it'd be a waste. And please include longer more detailed sex scenes.

I'd also like to request a Revan/Mission/Yuthura threesome. Yummy!

Very good I love it. I would love to see a male LS Raven and Bastila. Also love to a darkse version of both of them too. Also would love to see a Female Raven & Juhani & Bastila & Mission chapter if at all possible.