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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story and i totally agree that there is not enough TRISH X DANTE. There my favourite pairing and we should see more of those kind of stories.
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am glad you dont mind OOC for writers in the DMC fandom, Kidavi and that you like Remus. He is a good OC. Everyone has different preferences.
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just discovered this story, (and then went and bookmarked your site, since you're sounding kinda fed up, and I want to read MORE).
Your lack of beta doesn't show hugely in the later chapters - I probably wouldn't have noticed much of a difference other than some misplaced punctuation and the really occasional awkward phrase if it hadn't been pointed out directly.
As for the content? Dante-torture is a beauiful thing. Well-written Dante-torture is a beautiful and amazingly rare thing. And oh my god, Dante and Trish having moments in a fic with m/m noncon and (what looks like) some Vergil/Dante moments in the future as well?
Wow. Just wow. All my favourite poisons in one. It's nice to know that there really are writers out there who can handle multigendered content and keep what I liked about the characters in the games intact. (I was beginning to wonder if there was some kind of law against m/m and m/f coexisting in the same fic.)
I like your worried, protective Trish, your edgy, angry Dante (the phrase that applies here is "in character") and even your non-omnipotent, surprisingly layered OC. I actually want to know what happens and where you're going, and in this fandom, that's a rare thing.
Hope the review wasn't too long/wanky for your tastes; if you want a deeper crit or a temporary beta, feel free to email me, and, nore importantly, thanks for a yummy, yummy read.
Your lack of beta doesn't show hugely in the later chapters - I probably wouldn't have noticed much of a difference other than some misplaced punctuation and the really occasional awkward phrase if it hadn't been pointed out directly.
As for the content? Dante-torture is a beauiful thing. Well-written Dante-torture is a beautiful and amazingly rare thing. And oh my god, Dante and Trish having moments in a fic with m/m noncon and (what looks like) some Vergil/Dante moments in the future as well?
Wow. Just wow. All my favourite poisons in one. It's nice to know that there really are writers out there who can handle multigendered content and keep what I liked about the characters in the games intact. (I was beginning to wonder if there was some kind of law against m/m and m/f coexisting in the same fic.)
I like your worried, protective Trish, your edgy, angry Dante (the phrase that applies here is "in character") and even your non-omnipotent, surprisingly layered OC. I actually want to know what happens and where you're going, and in this fandom, that's a rare thing.
Hope the review wasn't too long/wanky for your tastes; if you want a deeper crit or a temporary beta, feel free to email me, and, nore importantly, thanks for a yummy, yummy read.
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! *hanging from her seat waiting for another* If you do leave AFF.net am going to miss your great and wonderful works! I hope you decided to stay! (then again I check you jackpot site alot also ;p)
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the plot! Althought I'm not sure where it is going yet, I'll have to wait then of course. Keep updating, please.
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well like I say to you in Y-gallery I'm here jejejeh
I love this chapter as well as the others, and I'l hope the next will be updated sooner ^^
I want to see Dante kicking Daemon's ass xDDDD
C'mon I'll be waiting for more!!!
I love this chapter as well as the others, and I'l hope the next will be updated sooner ^^
I want to see Dante kicking Daemon's ass xDDDD
C'mon I'll be waiting for more!!!
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Satanic Verses: YOU GO GIRL!
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, it definitely helps you write, knowing there are people interested. As for Remus, I like him not one bit. Not with Dante anyway. Dante turned into a way OOC non-Dante Dante. Confused? ^_^; RemusxDante = RemusxOC in my opinion. That's just me (ok, and about ten or twenty people somewhere else).
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o.O oooh, I see rape coming.. Or perhaps it is just me.. Ah, poor Dante. ::hugs him:: >< Good thing I wear black, he's covered in blood.
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a few reviews have been removed as per someone's request. ^^ sorry, folks. don't want to be stepping on anyone's toes here.