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for Tu Fui, Ego Eris

by HazardousRaptor

person Jen
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE your Haunting Ground fics! Please continue when you can :)

person Silver_Slumber
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Is silent for a few moments*...Ok, I just have to say...That was awesome! Fantastic job my friend. I was hooked from the very start. You indeed have writting skills. Your description of things makes it like I'm really there. And what you said in the beginning, on how some people hate it when you go into detail, like Riccardos boots or Fionas ankle geeting hurt. Well god damnit, who cares about those people. I love how you go into all that detail. I also love how you go through the cutscenes of the story and give the possible thoughts and feelings of what was going on. Hell I wonder if you're an undercover Capcom worker. I mean jesus you had every single character down so right. I don't know just how the hell you did that, but it was freakin great! Please continue. I really want to see what happens. I imagine it must take a while to update since each of your chapters are so long, and not to mention you have to edit them. But please, please, keep going. This is my fav story on here. You did a great job, and really really good fantastic job. Well done.

Silver_slumber
person Silver_Slumber
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh and sorry I forgot my email too. Mine is: Tigernut684@hotmail.com talk to me when you want. Hope you update soon, but take your time, can't rush perfection I always say.
person Hariah
schedule May 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story, and you are a very talented writer, but there are a few things that you should know. Anything can be put on this site, of course, but most people who come here to read are extremely horny and looking for a lot of senseless, hardcore porn. This story is too good to be senseless, hardcore porn...and in appoximately sixty pages, or more, there has been no sex so far, and I would rate this pg-13. The worst thing that has happened has been a gyn exam, and trust me, there is NOTHING sexy about those. I HATE having to get the damned things; just thinking about them makes all women a bit ill. My advice would be for you to put this on fanfiction.net with a rating of M (mature) or R, whatever they happen to be calling it this week. You'll get a lot more readers, and a lot more attention, and I think that it will be in a more appropriate place then. Honey, you're too good for this place. This story is too good to be locked in a porn cesspool, and I'm sure that people on fanfiction.net would absolutely adore it.

~Hariah
person Hariah
schedule May 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, it hid my email. My email is hariah@sbcglobal.net and my AIM name is Princess Azula if you want to chat. I don't want to seem like I just reviewed and ran off like a weenie...wonderful story, again!

~Hariah
person Cyn
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fanfic is AMAZING! I'm completely enthralled and will check back religiously each day for a new chapter =)
person foxegirl90
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FINISH IT!!!!!!!!