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August 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The part when Peach and Daisy died in the quicksand makes me want to cry.
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August 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The part when Peach and Daisy died in the quicksand scares me.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Right erm. First of this is not intended as a flame, just a small bit of advice really So please don't take offence. The idea is good but at some points it was kind of hard to read. Many people on AFF would have gave up reading once it started to become hard work. However I stook with it and enjoyed it. I think you could do with making it slightly easier to read. :)
Good fic overall 8/10. Nice one.
Good fic overall 8/10. Nice one.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yo dude. Try mario fics on www.fanfiction.net. They rawk.