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December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like the idea behind this story (mainly because it reminds me of a sim date game I've played), but I am dissapointed in the lack of updates for this potentially fantastic fic.
The one thing that doesn't make sense to me is that Aaron decides to do the list in order. Why does it matter what order he fucks them in as long as he fucks them?
The one thing that doesn't make sense to me is that Aaron decides to do the list in order. Why does it matter what order he fucks them in as long as he fucks them?
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Actually, this isn't a self-insert. Aaron is just a character I made up. I would NEVER put my own name into a fan fiction, lol!
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September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This makes me kind of sad.
It's written fairly well(though it does need some work), but the idea behind it kinda sucks for a fanfic. Especially because you refer to yourself by name; had you left 'I' anonymous, it would've worked out semi-well.
Self-insertions are a pet peeve of mine though, so maybe I'm being a little biased.
It's written fairly well(though it does need some work), but the idea behind it kinda sucks for a fanfic. Especially because you refer to yourself by name; had you left 'I' anonymous, it would've worked out semi-well.
Self-insertions are a pet peeve of mine though, so maybe I'm being a little biased.
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seriously dude, you have to get another chapter in. If you have time to edit the thing, I think you have time to write another chapter.
And P.S. You didn't really have to edit it that much, this is adultfanfic, you can't really go too extreme in here.
P.P.S. Ignore the guy above me, it also doesn't really matter settings either, you should see the shit people write about(hey, maybe you probably have).
And P.S. You didn't really have to edit it that much, this is adultfanfic, you can't really go too extreme in here.
P.P.S. Ignore the guy above me, it also doesn't really matter settings either, you should see the shit people write about(hey, maybe you probably have).
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July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
umm...
Soul Calibur? In a modern setting? I don't think it's a good idea...
Soul Calibur? In a modern setting? I don't think it's a good idea...
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pleaseeeeeeeee! Continue!
I wanna see to Ivy.
I wanna see to Ivy.
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great so far. Update.
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good start. please write more
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice intro. This has potential to be a great story just keep at it. I'll keep an eye out for the update.