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May 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is not yaoi. Thankfully. Is yaoi the only adult stuff there is?
Now ( gives truly wicked smile) for what I have to say: what a whack job this is. "He sucked her nipple hard and violent." That takes the interest to shit levels. Were you 12 when you wrote this horror?
Thank you, dear.
Now ( gives truly wicked smile) for what I have to say: what a whack job this is. "He sucked her nipple hard and violent." That takes the interest to shit levels. Were you 12 when you wrote this horror?
Thank you, dear.
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice and even a bit romantic. ;)
I really liked it, and I'd love to see a second chapter!
You really got talent, keep it up writing, whenever is this or something else.
I really liked it, and I'd love to see a second chapter!
You really got talent, keep it up writing, whenever is this or something else.
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaay....another Dante/Lady fanfic! Luv the ending, it's really cute^-^ Nice work!
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was cool. t'would be cooler if you separate your paragraphs. I know some authors do that, especially new authors as they clump a ton of paragraphs together but this is good. Very good for one of your first fics. Keep it up k? Dont be discouraged and keep writing ^_^
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January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i agree that you need to fix your paragraphs and check your work but other than that good job. I like your profile. I like both men and women too.
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well done :)