schedule
July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fic is teh awesomeness!! i'd definately say this has to be the best LOK fic here.
may i make a suggestion tho'
please add some scenes for the other lords!! there's not enough Dumah to go around....
and here's a wierd tidbit for you guys....Dumah and umah.....get it...wierd!!
XD
may i make a suggestion tho'
please add some scenes for the other lords!! there's not enough Dumah to go around....
and here's a wierd tidbit for you guys....Dumah and umah.....get it...wierd!!
XD
schedule
July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...I think You've reached the pinnacle of mary-sueism. If you'd put a bit more work into the basics of the story, or at least gotten a beta reader, this would have been forgiveable.
schedule
January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A quick spellcheck and a little attention to capitalization mishaps and nonsenisical sentences would do much to improve this fic.