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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story was great. I liked how you expressed Etna and Laharl's physical "relationship" even though it was obvious he wanted to be with Flonne.
Harllie X Flonne!lol
But this story was very good and animated and very in character. The beginning was awesome. Very cool fic.
Harllie X Flonne!lol
But this story was very good and animated and very in character. The beginning was awesome. Very cool fic.
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Yawns* Gaaaay....
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great awsome superb and o that was freakin awsome!
sry thought i would get my point across :)
sry thought i would get my point across :)
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This piece is a little odd, to say the least. The erotic portion of it is titillating and competently written, yet your characterization of the characters themselves seemed so off at the beginning that I assumed the worst. Laharl and Etna seemed extremely out of your character, like crude exaggerations of their personalities at the beginning of the game. Later on, this diminishes, especially with, as I said, the aforementioned competently-written sex.
Good stuff, but work on not taking TOO many liberties with character personalities, else the reader is thrown off.