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Holy snapping, wonderwiki! deadset, you are a God and I am your disciple....you can turn a simple kiss into a smorgasboard of emotions, images, sensations... I love reading your stuff and this chapter is seriously the best. No it isn't the best, all your chapters are fantastic, I just said that because Im still tingling from thinking about the base of Valen's tail :P

I was going to spit chips actually at you and yell because you didn't let me know you had updated, but then I remembered that my mail thing logged out (as it does every two weeks :P) and by the time I realised, I couldn't remember my password. I was wondering why the little letter thing had been empty for so long...so anyway, I figured that maybe you did let me know you updated but alas, I can't get the notification!

Anyway, when I figured that out and checked to see that you HAD updated, I was stoked! and then my mind was blown as it always is when I ready your work...and now I'm wrapt again to hear that this is only half of what you have written and that soon...SOON... there could be another update. Not that I'm rushing you, your stuff is always worth waiting for.

But well done again! You seriously are brilliant. If I tried to put as much detail in my work as you do yours, I'd send people to sleep I'm sure, but you just haul the reader along with you and they couldn't stop reading till it's done, even if they wanted to. Which I for one would not! lol.

So um....more kajun and kresjur soon too eh? :D *begs*

Oh, wow. I've been away from the internet for a while, and I must say, your updates have been the highlight of my return. As ever your writing is absolutely amazing. The only critiques I have would be that there are typos from time to time (which is nothing big, I find typos in the books I buy), and that the drow are portrayed perhaps a bit too much like the surface cultures (also not a big deal, since you do a very good job of explaining why they're acting as they are. I'm just a drow fangirl). I love the way you worked in Valen's dialogue from the game, and had Ceald using the female prompts, haha. Your cliffhanger is pure evil, of course. Ah, well. Let the buttsecks commence!

Much <3

Oh my GOD, you are continuing this, right?! I don't even play this game, but I have fallen so completely for this story. First-person narration isn't usually my favorite to read, but you have done such a good job I couldn't help but read more, and enjoy it.

Thank you so much for such a well-written story!

This was incredibly fun to read-- I LOVE reading this through Ceald's point of view and how he gets all flustered when people are teasing him. :) Can't wait until you get another chapter out~

This is awesome it does take a lot for me to read slash cause it always seems OOC to me but there is one huge thing that has bugged me for the stroy and it is the way the characters sometimes talk as if they are in modern ages, they would never say in the slang you have used and it sometimes ruins the atmosphere of some parts that you have built up, apart from that this is good please continue on

"Woo Valen!" Man that line still puts a huge grin on my face. Sooo... how's that next chapter coming along ^_^;

*grabs her love and whacks ya in the head* Write, damn it! You have faithful cohorths to say how wonderful the story is, I'm here to crack my whip and make you write more and faster. For your own good - there would better be another chapter before I'm back with my spiked cat o'nine tails!

Ceald Amothien is most definitly one of the better fan fiction stories I have read. It is nice to see a story that has a
involveing and interesting plot instead of just being about sex. There is just the right amoung of every aspect of the story.
The fighting was interesting, the descriptions of everything allow the reader to visualize what is going on without being overdone,
and the interactions seem realistic instead of contrived or forced. I greatly look forward to the next chapter and all that entails.
All I have to say is I am so jelious of Ceald right now.

For some reason, half my review was eaten...>_>; Anyway, onwards!

I have to say, I am completely tickled pink that I checked back here and found not one, but two new chapters! *does a dance*

“How you doin’?” --This made me snicker to the point my roomie gave me a few funny looks. X3

Please continue! As always your writing isn't prey to the dry 'this-and-that' happened trap so many other authors fall for...you're telling a story that's fleshed out, solid, and utterly engrossing.

...I want to lick a fairy dragon toooo. ;_;

I entirely understand where you're coming from with making Valen the way he is. It makes perfect sense to me that he'd treasure his humanity rather than just teh fact he's part human.

I must say I did enjoy the flow of the conversation between Valen and Ceald. That's the real deal right there; awkward silences and saying things before thinking about them. I've said it before and I'll say it again: I adore the pace you've taken with the romance. Even in the first two chapters it was evident that there was something between the two. But there wasn't any rush to get them together like I've seen some authors do.

Also, Ceald's flirting? Pure gold. What I wouldn't give to have been there to see Valen blush. Granted he'd had some alcohol but I still say making a tiefling blush is a feat to be proud of!

And in closing: the fact Oerth tastes like sparkles is to die for. Am I crazy that I'm always fixating on the familiar? Don't get me wrong, I'm looking forward to the sex as much as everyone else, but I've mentioned the dragon in everyone of the reviews I've made. I MUST be mad. I'm also wondering if Oerth will approve of Ceald's choice of mate or is he going to be jealous of Valen for stealing attention?