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MORE PLEASE OH PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!!!

I am hooked, I tell you. Must have more yummy Valen and Ceald.

This story is just soooooooooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooooood!

I started reading this story originally on fanfiction.net and was bummed that there were only three chapters posted there. Then I was told about this site and I was delighted to find this story here. I enjoyed the 3 chapters I had read before and am looking forward to reading the rest that you have posted here. The thought of a Valen yaoi story is a delicious idea. Thanks for sharing.

I've gotta tell you-- I came late to NWN and when I played it I wondered whether there was any fanfiction worth reading, and this is definitely just about the only one that I've come across that I adore! It is in equal parts epic and sexy and I would love to read more if you plan on continuing. It's highly enjoyable to read a take on the story, especially with the main character you're portraying.

*Brain is fried* How.Do.You.Do.It? O my God. I love this to the point of it being unhealthy! The sex, The plot, The characters! I've read ALOT of fanfiction and I've got to say this makes number one on everything! Please don't stop writing. You've got a faithful fan here. LOL I've faverited this fanfiction and I check on it every other day. You're an awesome auther.
Your number one fan

Dracros

A friend of mine has been bugging me about a great story he found and couldn't get out of his head so I finally gave in and decided to read it too.
Wow! He was so damn right! *grin*
I love your story. Where should I start? Listening to Ceald's thoughts is just plain fun. :) He's not the typical hero.. that's probably why I like him so much. Anybody ever tell Ceald he thinks way too much? Being a mage and all I can understand that but hey... he's in the bed of that big, sexy tiefling! And your Valen? Hot damn! Very yummy! I wouldn't be surprised if they never got out of bed again. I'd definitely keep him there as long as possible. *laugh*
I also liked your descriptions of the battle scenes. They had me sitting on the edge of my seat!
The jump from the rooftop and the polymorph in the battle for Lyth Myathar. I could actually see it in my head.

Wonderful writing.
I can't wait to see more of it. :)

Holy snapping Wonderboy, I've learned to review your chapters as I read them, there is always so much GOOD STUFF in them and they are so heady that if I don't, I'm too exhausted by the end to do anything more than say HOOOOEEE WLYYY SHEEEEIT!

K...The Valsheres? Keep in mind, I've never played NWN (I've explained why too, stupid freaking game that doesn't work heheh) But holy snapping, I got such a good feel for her in this chapter, she is my kind of villain! I love her, what a nasty piece of work lol. That's what I love about this story, I don't need to know anything about NWN to freaking enjoy it out of control. Sheesh you are good...

K...The part where he is talking about the Archmage who laid a geas on him? How cool is that? And realistic too, that it was a simple knot but had a mountain of power behind it. I heard once that Bruce Lee had only a few simple moves but he had perfected them to point devastation. Bloody brilliant and nothing to do with your story hehe, but you know...it's the logical little things like that in your stuff that make it believable enough to get the adrenalin pumping. Just fantastic...and don't be hard on yourself Ceald, pride is great! Kick her butt! lol

DO IT CEALD, DO IT, DRAG HIM OVER AND DEVOUR HIM! hahhahaha I love this, you are so good lol.

NOOOOOO!!! *smacks Ceald's reason down and tells it to piss off!*

Freaking brilliant wonderboy, my only criticism (i don't think I even spelled that right!) was that you have perfected the cliffhanger...that was just cruel finishing there lol. I love it. Bloody fantastic, as usual! All the cock description? Reow! My favourite hahahaha no I take that back...no bugger it, I don't. I love Valen, the base of his tail, and the base of his... fantastic!

Oh one more thing before I forget, which I nearly did in the face of Valen's...tail...

The obsidian statue of the dancing girl? Man I loved that part. Besides the smut...that would have to be my favourite part hey.

I have to say, this is by far the best fan fiction I've ever read and to be quite honest I'm generally rather picky about fictions I read or like. I'm very glad that I recently decided to replay my old Neverwinter game, which led me to the curious thought if there would be any fictions out on it at all. In all honesty I wasn't really expecting any of the fictions to be all that great. But yours, oh man I stayed up till around 7am reading all of it then re-read it once again after waking. Mind you I actually finished reading around 5 but it was quite impossible for me to sleep after that being as wound up as the story got me. I've never actually played the Under dark version of Neverwinter so I didn't know who Valen was at first. I must agree he is one sexy man, however I quite like Ceald more then him. In fact he's my favorite so far, its a bit hard to explain for me why. Just the way he views things, the amusement, and I have to say he does have quite a bit of bad luck mixed in with the good. I love the way he re acts to most things as well. All in all the character is much love and I wouldn't be surprised if I try sketching little doodles of your character there.

For the story itself, its so very well written with a very unique way of describing things. Like how you do the battles its not too drawn out and it keeps your interest. Sometimes very amusing and also realistic for the world of Neverwinter. Like the screaming illithid flying towards Ceald. Also the part with the mentioning of Tomi was quite nice, he's always been my favorite henchman so far, although the mentioning of finding his body like that was sad. There's so many good things I'd love to put but my brains still jumping everywhere trying to find a way to put the words down in a manner that they would be coherent. Quite frustrating actually, ah yes I also must commend you on the story/storyline as well. I've tried writing fictions before it isn't easy, especially if you have a spastic mind. Right now I'm having troubled making my mind focus on what else I could put down but nothing really comes to mind. All I can say is that I am in awe and you most definitely have a fan of this story and of Ceald now.

Damnit! how did you sneak ANOTHER chapter past me! Nooooo

smut! FANTASTICO! BRAVO! I loved every bit of it. It went really smoothly!
WHen do we get the asskicking! now that they've knocked boots, they can combine powers to form Voltron, right?...

wait... nevermind. Anyway! Huge fan love. I send you email. Right... Now.

*click*

Damn, you did it again. Goddamn. Goddamn. DAMN.

It was a while before I could clean up all the drool and get back to reviewing this. This ended up being way the hell more than the sex scene I bargained on. I had no idea that Caeld was a virgin, number one (being an elf and over a hundred years old, that says a lot...) and the fact that he'd give himself to Valen like that... well... damn.

The emotional aspects of it were spellbinding, but the part that really stuck out to me was Caeld clinging to his pride, opting not to do it in the easiest position.

He is going to hurt like fucking crazy after this. Nothing like going to hell with a sore ass though...

You know, I just realized, the Valsharess came AFTER the battle. Nice way to change it up - it seemed natural.