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by Kundrat1280

person wanderingaddict
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the most recent two chapters, way to mix it up! (plus the sex was hot!)
person The PD
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, i gota say, this is a fantastic chapter! I LOVE THE ENDING!!!!!!!!

Aiight, i loved how ya blended in other characters, and how it wasn't just one size fits all... Orcs are bigger then Gobo's! Also, Pixil is yet again a fking hilarious slut. You are the best writer i have yet to read... well.. meby this starwars one.....

Just kidding kido, keep up the good work!
person johntheheavy
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hurrah another awesome chappie! Extremely hot and sexy! I like the pair you come up with orc/goblin human/gnome makes it kinky! I think more taurens should be included like in your other fics :)
person Darkon
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kickass as usual. If you keep writin', I'll keep readin'.
person Anon
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome
person The PD
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

/end babble

That fix helped... and was disturbing... and funny :-D

Pixil i say!! PIXIL!
person Darkon
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once again, you WILL continue to write more, oh yes. I also agree with the guy above me about more Pixil content, beacuse as we all know, hot gnomette sex NEVER gets old!
person The PD
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... i gota say that was pretty good :-D

The 1st chapter had some format error where it had to be scrolled to the side to read, but chap 2 was perfectly done! The end there is a typo with the > but w/e.

Very good, keep on writting, add more pixel, pixle, w/e, probably in a WSG/AB :-D Go for it you crazy!
person johntheheavy
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that deserves a big fat lol right there my freind nice one!
person johntheheavy
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Strangely hot.....I like the atmosphere created between Horde and Alliance here