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for Mark & Kevin: In The Tank

by ChrisKross

schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So not my cup of tea, but this had no review so I decided to make a few comments. I like slash and yaoi when done...properly. Though to be honest, many people DO like the whole "Daddy fuck me thing"-- it is a fetish that many folks have I guess. To each, their own. I role played a guy online once who wanted to be shrunk, and I went with it for fun. Since I am a decent writer past the elementary level, he orgasmed before I could even get my "fantasy" clothes off. Rather disappointing actually. Anyway, this fic had some intriguing moments, but as you stated in your summery, this was a basic PWP, so to rip on this fic when I was warned-- would be retarded and make me look like a fool. Bottom line, it will serve the purpose well of people who are just looking for a story with just straight up fucking. Good job on that regard.