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Firstly, I applaud your taste in music.
Secondly: Wow. This fanfic.
I couldn't have imagined Vergil and Dante as teenage boys growing up around humans. The characters are very well written, and remain believable and as close to the personalities as possible, given the situations.
The action parts were good, if not a little short at times (hardly a proper criticism, since it probably wasn't that kind of action people are on here to read. ;) )

And thank you for the long chapters. Too many writers try to keep it short, which doesn't help when you're out and public wi-fi is child safe. ;)
Keep up the good work!

GEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!! XD Love them!!!! they're so sweettttt!!! >w<
ya write good fic ne ^__^ i love that, hehehe.

Well, you most certainly do rant a lot. Not that it's a bad thing. I do it all the time.. But I end up erasing them XD. You are a very good writer, yep. Your style is very good too. My writing style doesn't suit well with novels, it's more of a screenplay style. XP Damn me, damn me...

AGAIN, you have done it! Far surpassed any love-lorn brilliance I have EVER seen, even in a novel, for crissake! You captured each of their characters with perfection befit to the best of authors, and the opassion and fervor is TANGIBLE in the 10-point font on this screen.
I give you a bravo, an encore, and if I had a medal, It would be yours!

What can I say that hasn't already been said? Hmm... Oh! Dante's shirts r0xx0rz my b0xx0rz. Your take on the twins during their teenage...hood...time... Yeah, it's interesting. Some of the things they do and say just make me kinda go, "Woah!" all Neo like, but it's in a good way. Like, something I wish I would have thought up. I definitely enjoyed that part of the story the most. Your awesomely original ideas will never cease to amaze me. Keep on rawking and don't forget that the only thing you need is MORE SEX! ^_~

Your 'author response' is actually normal sized compared to some. There's only one more chapter? Awwww...

let me say first that i think this is very well-written; i like it. i'm curious as to where you derive your characterizations from (primarily game? comic? manga? novella?), simply because they differ from so many other authors'. of course, this is definitely not a bad thing, it's quite refreshing. although personally, i really don't see the twins harboring so much emo/teen angst in their childhood, nor can i ever picture Dante getting his ass kicked at school (i never considered Dante the type to let others pick on him). it's an interesting twist though, even though i don't agree. ^_^ Dante was always a hedonistic free spirit to me, so seeing him show a lot of teen-angst is... quite different. i feel that they both just have so much specific angst later on, i can't picture them being so angsty as children. but this is beautifully written, gracefully executed, and i hope to see you keep it up. (btw, feel free to contact me to discuss if you like~ i always love to chat with people who have differing opinions.) *thumbs up*

Very, very well done. Enjoyed it a lot and cannot wait for more.

Oh, very well done indeed! Keep writing this.

twINcest from DMC_Fanfiction on Yahoo. I've always been awed by your writing, and the fact that you can write so much so quickly. Chapter 2, and you've got about 50 pages already. Scary, it's almost as if you pull them from thin air, of course you didn't though.