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for Of Swords, Jewels, and Devil Children

by kidavi

schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story it is so Fucking sexy!! ^o^
person delonariel
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read DMC stuff for a while, and now I find this and I wonder how I could ever live without. This was just so perfect, nostalgic and deep yet so very comforting.
I'll look out for more of your stuff
Thank you
person kidavi
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This fic was one of three entries to the DMC Holiday Fanfiction Contest.

The winners were announced here: [http://community.livejournal.com/devil_may_cry_c/136363.html]

All three of the stories I submitted placed, winning me 1st for Yaoi Author overall.

Thank you so much to everyone who voted for me! ^^
person Devil May Cry for me
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Loved it. I love how you dabbled in everything. Keep up the good work!
person yamiskoi
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! This was so freakin' awesome!! I loved every minute of it... The build up, the sex... Everything... Was so great. *Runs off to play Devil May Cry* Thank you for giving me a reason to last this Saturday night out. ^_________^
person Celesta
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. I wish you can write a sequel. i wanna see them get it on with the new beds installed! XD
person Kireiko
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As always, wonderfully written, kidavi-san. I have no idea why this particular piece would cause you such anguish, I understand your reasoning mind you, but it was so well done... and if this is what you produce when you're outside your comfort zone... O____o!! You've done an awesome job, as per usual. I daresay you may have even sparked a little more yaoi interest in than I thought possible... heh.

~Kir
person Ultima
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First things first, I could totally see Dante and Vergil fighting for the top bunk. XD Seriously, though, this was a well written story which portrayed the twins fairly accurately. However, to me, it seems like they fell a little TOO naturally into the "hey, let's bang" part of the story. Also, I find it hard to believe that Dante would masturbate so freely if he and Vergil were sharing a room. Devil children or not, that's not usually something people like to do in front of someone so openly. Anyway, the concept was decent, and I hope this one does well in the contest! Who knows, maybe I'll have something written by then myself... ^_~


- Jen
person hisoka Kurosaki
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! That was awesome.
person Rane Aria
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Even if it was a little AU it was still great!