rate_review Reviews

nice story...love it...but too long....ghehehehehe

Another Great chapter, please keep up the good work.

I really liked this fic and the pairing. Please keep going with it. I'll keep reviewing it ^_^

The story was good, and yeah there where mistakes but otherwise I found it quite good.

Great work. =) Great chapter and keep up the good work.

You did give fair warning about English not being your main language, but I am afraid that your grammar problems are unable to be ignored. The dialogue and descriptions are too riddled with unrealistic and incorrect verb conjugations, and the overall result is distracting.

I read through the entire fic, and while it seems you did work hard to bring a mix of both action and mild sensuality, it seems you'd do well to get in contact with another writer so that he can proofread your story.

You may not be able to help that that English isn't your first language, but there are others who can. Bottom line, other readers may not be patient enough to read through the entire thing.

I liked how you made the fic distinctly "Resident Evil" by writing in confrontations with various monsters and such. You do seem to have a good knowledge of the source material.

You really could've used a beta reader on this. It's really hard to read due to grammar and spelling issues.

Not bad. Finally someone did a Kevin/Yoko pairing. Many thanks.