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ok ok, so nobodys about to die, thats good, btu why the hell are we gunna get egghead mixed into this?/ i meanim not totaly sure if its hime, but its just liek a feelin yo, any way as long as theres soem gore and action, im all good. once again i have a wuestion thoguh, wdoesnt it take 9 months for a abby to be due, its just a question, cause my mo mtook 9 months. or is it differnt cause there hedge hogs?

Don't make Chapter 3 soon I might go crazy well crazier.

my anger is great along with my insainty.

Wonderfull. Cant wait to see how this all turns out.

I read the first chapter when you posted the epilouge to the first story, but haven't had time to leave a proper review.

I must say, I'm very impressed with this first chapter. Funny how the craziness of childbirth and labor can sap the calminess out of even the Ultimate Lifeform himself. Well done. I also liked the fact that you had the labor start and stop at instances, (as it does happen in real life). Very, very believable.

I also like the little bundle of joy already. At least those readers who were still confused by the end of the first story know for certain (by now at least) that it's Shadow's kid, along with a wonderful description of the features the child inherited from both parents.

I've read a lot of those fics where the author is trying to pull of either something absolutely unique and the description of the kid's features makes it out to be something from a horror movie or scientific experiment gone horribly wrong.

But anyway, keep up the great work. I loved the foreshadowing of events for this sequel you did in the epilogue, so I'm anticipating it. :3

Little "Eclipse". I have to say that you picked the perfect name. I hope he grows up to be like his mother and father. Please update soon.

YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! HURAY! I'm glad. But i was realy hoping the baby was a girl.

Kill one of them? Damnit, why not let them all stay alive? I know they're the principals characters of the story and that you could already have wrote the full script in your head, but must they suffer every bad of the world? Give them a break already...

Great chapter. Now I'm waiting for more.

You've made a brave move to create a sequel to begin with, though through bravery comes reward- so far the story is kicking ass and I'm excited to read what will happen to Eclipse, Amy and Shadow next! :D Writing style is just as spectacular as in the last ARAAT, every segment of the first chapter is more than inventive to satisfy my tastes, and above all I have seen no similarities between this fic and any other ShadAmy fic I've read (though I haven't seen many :P)... So far, that is. Keep it going and you've got my promise that I'll keep reading and leaving reviews for every chapter, you guys have pulled together quite a masterpiece of a first chapter even if it was a little quick :)

-Darkhaven3

That was great but maybe you could a different one like instead of a boy a girl.