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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I for one prefer sonic to do suiside then cut himself and yet thats not enough to repent for what he had done.
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is one of the best Fan fic's I have read in a long time. So I would like to thank you two for this great story, there are so few in the Sonic catigory.
Man I blew thew it in two days, two work days. I like your interesting and informed but not uptyte interpretation of the Sonic characters. I must confess I have actualy seen this story in the derectory for some time but I just cept passing it up, and know that I look back I can't for the life of me figure out how I missed such a jewel. I'd like to extend my apoligy.
In closeing I have but one sugestion about an issue I've noted in some of the Fan fiction I have been reading for a long time. My suggestion and request is that you please do not stop in the middle of the story.
"Thank you", Rand^^
Man I blew thew it in two days, two work days. I like your interesting and informed but not uptyte interpretation of the Sonic characters. I must confess I have actualy seen this story in the derectory for some time but I just cept passing it up, and know that I look back I can't for the life of me figure out how I missed such a jewel. I'd like to extend my apoligy.
In closeing I have but one sugestion about an issue I've noted in some of the Fan fiction I have been reading for a long time. My suggestion and request is that you please do not stop in the middle of the story.
"Thank you", Rand^^
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAHHHH! SHADOW AND AMY HAVE A BABY! Oh... that is so awsome! I am a big fan of Shadamy fics. I always knew that Shadow and Amy belonged together. Oh yah, and sorry if my previous story seemed exactly like yours. I see how similar the two are but too tell the truth I didn't even know there was an adultfanfiction 'till you told me in that 'flame'. -_-' Well... keep on writin'! I really want to know what happens next! (I really like what Eclipse looks like! So cute!)XD
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice Chapter. At least Sonic's understands what he did was wrong. Have fun on the next chapter.
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmmm....
Man does his life just SUCK now. You took Sonic farther than suicidal depression, and jumped for outright manic depression (Spelling?) with a small obsession from his own suffering. And yes, it's much worse than contemplating suicide. I know... ... ... ... ... ...
Back to the review, I still say Shadow needs to run into him with a wooden spoon.
I swear, Tails has got to be a Taoist (or close to it). Still trying to be a friend of Sonics, and the character actually would.
You broke up Sonic and Rouge? I'm not gonna ask what my better half wants to ask.
I suppose I should have expected that for answer, it was a preety obscure question... (and misdirected...)
Respectfully yours
AntwerpsRule
Man does his life just SUCK now. You took Sonic farther than suicidal depression, and jumped for outright manic depression (Spelling?) with a small obsession from his own suffering. And yes, it's much worse than contemplating suicide. I know... ... ... ... ... ...
Back to the review, I still say Shadow needs to run into him with a wooden spoon.
I swear, Tails has got to be a Taoist (or close to it). Still trying to be a friend of Sonics, and the character actually would.
You broke up Sonic and Rouge? I'm not gonna ask what my better half wants to ask.
I suppose I should have expected that for answer, it was a preety obscure question... (and misdirected...)
Respectfully yours
AntwerpsRule
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You'd better start now because I will do somtehing mad man/girl.
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What if Dooms eye appears and takes Shadow's son and learns that's his father.
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmm....
Small part of me wanted Sonic to show up, but it will live without. I'm sure you two have plans for him in the near or far future.
Anyhoo, even though paractically nothing developed, save for a few plot spoilers, great chapter.
In all honestly though... and I'm not trying to be a bastard about this, but I have to get this off my chest.
You gave the child the trait to preform Chaos abilities without the aid of an emerald. I suppose this is the one thing that makes young Eclipse stand out from the others, but in all honesty... how exactly was the child capible of attempting Chaos Controll while still in Amy's womb, while leaving her unharmed? Just me asking, and I'm not trying to sound like a dick about it, but there it is.
All confusion aside, it was a great chappy
Strange people already interested in the child? This is gonna be good.
Respectfully yours,
AntwerpsRule
Small part of me wanted Sonic to show up, but it will live without. I'm sure you two have plans for him in the near or far future.
Anyhoo, even though paractically nothing developed, save for a few plot spoilers, great chapter.
In all honestly though... and I'm not trying to be a bastard about this, but I have to get this off my chest.
You gave the child the trait to preform Chaos abilities without the aid of an emerald. I suppose this is the one thing that makes young Eclipse stand out from the others, but in all honesty... how exactly was the child capible of attempting Chaos Controll while still in Amy's womb, while leaving her unharmed? Just me asking, and I'm not trying to sound like a dick about it, but there it is.
All confusion aside, it was a great chappy
Strange people already interested in the child? This is gonna be good.
Respectfully yours,
AntwerpsRule
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well you ceartinly can't kill of eclipse, cause the friggin story is named after him u dopes, then it woudl make no sense. im going for amy caus eshe might have some after math of the whoel irth thing, i mean shadow juts recovered, its amys turn for the near death experinse...
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
K, you're a good writer and all, but I HAVE to get this off of my chest. Just because you are a good writer, doesn't mean you should go around saying to others that they're crap. I've been on fanfiction.net and I've seen the comment you've given to a friend of mine. Does the name 'Little Pink Rose' ring any bells? Telling her she's crap without really going into how she can improve, honestly! Can you not give a postive review when you see someone who needs help? Do you have to say 'you're crap' all the time? She's a kid and English is not her first language. My friend agrees with me. She said you are just another flamer what with the way you nag her with 'you're crap' with no actual tips for improvement, and no confidence giving.
Sorry, but I had to get that off my chest.
Onto the story, not bad. I'm looking forward to seeing Sonic. He's my fave. Of course, we know he's depressed. It makes me wanna hug him... *is a huge Sonic fan*. As for Eclipse, you chose the right name. It suits him down to the ground.
Sorry, but I had to get that off my chest.
Onto the story, not bad. I'm looking forward to seeing Sonic. He's my fave. Of course, we know he's depressed. It makes me wanna hug him... *is a huge Sonic fan*. As for Eclipse, you chose the right name. It suits him down to the ground.