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for ARAAT2: Eclipse - Part 1

by Breech_Loader

person Bob the Barbarian
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sonic's a psyco, befitting. Amy went through labor for ten hours, torture fit for hell, and nowhere else. Robotnik's a fur perv, that was nothing but obvious, (it gets lonely with nothin' but bots). Rouge and Amy are on talking terms, far from expected. And the government is spying on people, looking for the next big gun (in this case, Eclipse), instead of trying the to end stavation and poverty. Everything seems in order, just one question, how old is everyone supposed to be? Anywho, I'll probably never know,(since you never answer any of my reviews, and the chances of you doin' so now are slim-to-none,) so good story so far, update soon.
person Anon
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
For the love of all things Sega Sonic, get over the amazing OOC Mary Sue Amy. You're embrassing yourself. I don't like ShadowAmy so your story will suck reguardless. Not because you can't write because I actually favor that weird Tails story--very interesting and well written--but this pairing has just never suited my taste. Though I will say: I hope you are going somewhere more interesting than "the baby is somehow very important and has special powers so everyone and their momma wants it" or at the very least, make it more interesting than the million times it's been done in this and other fan based stories. Because I would like to think you're more creative than that. Like being that key word.
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw damn, I envy your talent. LMAO.

It's amazing: I don't really like the pairing, but I'm so addicted to your story that I can't possibly stop reading it now. The first one was fantastic, to say the least. And this one as a great start! Just don't kill Amy or Shadow please--that would totally make me have to come hunt you down with my Tails Doll.

::tickles:: The baby is just adorable! Awww. ::Coos at it:: Though I do hope Sonic will be *okay* by the end of all of this. That little guy is beginning to scare me. I feel bad for him, even if he was a jerk the first story--at least give him a semi happy ending somehow. And Tails was right on the money. So sweet and loyal, he would totally stick by Sonic.

Update soon: impatience is a witch with a 'b' and waiting sucks just as bad. Oh! That was nice fan art by the way to the artist. Very pretty!
person Rand^^
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Sonic, a cuter didn't see that one comeing. But it does fit with his emotional state. Any way I eagerly await chapter four.

Rand^^,

ps. Will Eclipse stay a baby all through the fic?
person Skittle Sama
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You should really check your e-mail more often, Harley. =D
http://www.skittlesama.com/Ura18/Illust/RoseThorn.jpg
("A Rose and a Thorn": Chapter One Dialogue)

I loved your 'Rose and Thorn' series so much that I absolutely had to draw it a scene from the first one.
You give the characters such a lifelike quality. A quality that helps the readers relate to them in one way or another through their everyday lives. Between Shadow and Amy finding something in one another that brought them together and gave them a family- or Sonic's recent depressive nature.

It truly goes to show that even the truest of heroes have their demons, too. I can't wait for the next chapter of the sequel.

From on Shadow/Amy fan to another-
-Skittle Sama
person Katina_san
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
all i can say is that you have an amazing taste for making fics! i can proudly say that your one of my favorite authors ~.^ I love how theres a mix of romance/betrayal/suspense/comedy and all that good stuff in your story!. i read the first part of this fic, and practically said "wow" so im glad you continued it! i really enjoy your ideas and hope you keep up the awesome work!! Keep the edge-of-your-seat, and detailed work of genious XD can't wait for the following chapters!

and i love both Shadow's and Amy's baby, Eclipse! cute! X3
person The DarkChao
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Although Sonic i definatly one of my favorite characters I definatly dont mind how fucked up he is. Why? I personally dont know! Im really glad tails is still sonics friend even after all that but what else would you expect? anyways thank you both of you two for another awsome chapter.
person Angel
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sonic! *pulls Sonic away from the razor blade and hugs him* My poor baby... hehe... I'm a huge Sonic lover. Nevertheless, it was beautiful. I hope it all turns out better for him, he deserves at least some happiness...
person Sonamy-lover
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool fic, even though Shadamy sux.
person MAJSJN_MNEONDS
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm make Sonic suffer ,eh? If I find you let's say your ass will be feeling sore just kidding.