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Damn! I had no idea about the robots being in the games. i haven't played a new sonic game in ages. that's so tight!

Damn! Shadow was captured and is being tortured. (in more ways then one)

Damn! Shadow actually wants Sonic to save him? he must be delirious.

Definitly getting darker now. i do hope you update soon!!

Wow. This story actually isn't as bad as the first one, where the Mary Sue light was shining right out of Amy's pink ass. I'm actually speechless about that. More so now that Sonic isn't some bastard this time around: though I'm just waiting for you to remember and bring that biased hatred you seem to have for him in all your fanfiction back so that he'll once again try and do something stupid.

I won't bother to say everyone is so far out of character that Shadow should slap you for it, as I figure you must know this by now. Well hell, I take that back: Cream's still in character. For the most part. When she's in the story. (I'm including your first fiction which made me cringe in bloody shame.) And I suppose I can't argue about Knuckles or Tails too much. But everyone else? Since when the hell did Amy = Cream's personality? You single handedly, took away the other half of what made her personlity interesting and UNMary Sue like. She can be jealous, immature, funny, a tad obessessive, determined, stubborn. You've ruined her with your "OMG, she's so perfect" Mary Sue way of writing her.
What the FUCK have you done to Shadow? No wait. Just don't answer that. That might scare me worse than him turning into a complete fluff &*%$@ like in other countless fanfictions. With Rouge you just seemed to take all of her worst traits and make them shine more than her having a balanced personality. Sega should SUE you for what you've done to Sonic. (But as I said, I think someone doesn't like him too much because him being a bastard in your fic is a damn trend. Geez, he can be cocky but he was NEVER that bad.)

Seriously, I salute you for actually doing this one better than the last. But seriously. Go actually play a Sonic game. Cause you really don't seem to have a clue how the actual characters act. Or at least you have them mixed up with other characters. Though I doubt the latter, minus Amy.

Oh, and by the way. Get your head out of your ass because despite what you might think and what your little cronies might tell you, you are no where NEAR the best author on this website. (Or many actually.) Scribe for example, has you beat by miles.

they could use some of these robot ideas in the show. where did you come up with the invincible Tails bot? another excellent chapter, not too dark yet, update soon!

Wooo this story is making me so excited now! I'm glad Sonic is getting back on track. Cause Sonic was scary there for a second. (Refering to part 1 with that remark as well.) This story is just plain wonderful and I can't wait to see what happens. I really hope the baby and Shadow are okay or at least someone goes to help them.

Love to read your story and please, PLEASE update soon!!

First and foremost... Egg Emperor 1.8? The poor man's gone senile.
FIGHT SCENE!!!!! Great, now I'm gonna see a tails doll in my nightmares. Oh well...
Sonic is slowly rebuilding himself it seems...and for him to admit that Shadow is needed, depression is an odd dance partner for him. It was kinda a shock for me to see Sonic move to support Amy as she tried to get out of the hospital bed...
Nursery from hell, that sums it up nicley. Shadow's kid running around with a firearm screaming out "Fuck em all no mercey!" is a creepy thought.
Wait...The violence that Eclipse sees from Shadow saving him would be more than what he is seeing now, since Shadow is the father, and biggest rolemodel...

Respectfully yours
AntwerpsRule

So... Nothing to acknowledge the fact that a shotguns recoil is not something you just ignore? Also, I know Shadow can pull the Chaos stuff without an emerald, what I don't know, is why the colour changed, it always used to be green...

Also, no offence meant but I rather prefferred the longer, meatier chapters of ARAAT one.

I love the throwbacks to old Sonic games in this chapter. Expesially making the Tails Doll the cirsed psycopath that he is. Anyways, great chapter, and i hope you update soon.

Great chapter. I don't wish to be rude, thou beleive there's soming missing in this chapter.

This shit is crunk, fo'shizzle.

But I have a question. Shadow is the Ultimate Life Form, so how does he get Amy pregnant? He was biologically created. I doubt Gerald was able to put any sperm into Shadow.

I have only just recently arrived at this site thanks to a friend, and 'A Rose and a Thorn' was one of the very first writings I read. I'm a writer myself and will soon post up a few stories of my own. *Ahem* More to the point of what I’m getting at...this has to be one of the best pieces of work I have ever read in a good damn long while (ARAAT 1 and 2)! Been in a kind of down time myself in my own writing...thinking up things but not doing much, blah. This one, and very well done, story has inspired me to continue my writing, and more so inspired brand new ideas and better ways to express them. Yeah, I have been in one hell of a slump XD No way would I dare rip off this story, I have too much respect for it and it's writers. Anyway...

The story line is solid, , and very captivating. The descriptions with characters thoughts, expressions and so forth are highly constructed and nicely done. Not sure how else to describe it, (and I don’t want to appear as an overenthusiastic fan :P) just that I’m very excited to see how this all draws out in each chapter. Heh, glad I came here at this point or I would be a little nuts checking in a lot seeing if you guys updated or not. You guys have done an amazing job, no kidding. As one writer to another (well to both in this case I would guess being a co-production), I hope your writing continues to succeed and I look forward to see more of your work. I'd say more, but I feel I have said more than enough for one night...the sleepyness taking over the mind -_-...ZzZz....

Best wishes,
MurdocKeizer (best known as Dark Angel Murdoc)