rate_review Reviews

The amount of awesome this is blows my mind, very rarely do I find ANY good ShadAmy, even less with any Preg, thanks for a wonderful read as I get better from my horrible cough, nothing too impressive, just me choking every three minutes, that's all.
ANYWAY, I look forward to reading the next instalment, see ya there!!!

Love, Bloodsuckingmonster, FAM
(ps, I usually stay away from straight fanfics, being a yaoi fan and everything, so congrats on being the first straight fanfic I like...)
(LOL, the ReCAPTCHA thingy says Attempting Erection, I'm killing myself laughing over here!!)

Hmm, found the second part. The first chapret is very good.

I always hated that blue bastard...

Anyway, Ive read alot of good stories lately, And by far, this slaugters the compitition!
Just so ya know, the amount of stories i've read totals up to about... 165,096,213 stories! BEST FANFIC EVAH!!!!!!!

So far I've been enjoying this sequel. It's hard to judge a sequel without first looking at its predecessor, and that sometimes brings bias into things. However, ARAAT2 is in many ways different to the first. It's great to see that the characters we all know and love from our childhood are being portrayed now in a way that adults can appreciate them, even if not everybody agrees with the relaitonships. I love the name for the baby, Eclipse. It hints that he could be something far greater than his father. My only beef has already been mentined by N/A, and that's the idea of all the weapons Shadow took. I know he's the Ultimate Life Form, bu even he'd find himself encumbered physically by the amount of space the guns take up, even if he's not too bothered y the large weight.
Which conveniently brings me to my next point. I'm glad to see that despite the character's emotional maturity, they're still adhering (mostly) to the clothing that they are known for. I also enjoy how Sonic is not, for once, portrayed as the great hero everyone sees him as, yet he's still shown as being vulnerable by the fact that he's wracked with guilt for what he's done.
Top that all off with the fact that a plot beyond the initial couples is well in the works, and that makes this a surefire winner in the crazy world of adult fan fiction!

Nice start. I like it so far. But it is a tad more dark and sinister than the original. But I ain't complaining. Still has plenty of Shadamy and Shadow kicking ass and taking names. When will humanity learn not to mess bio weapons with god-like powers? I probably should just finish reading the whole story before I review, but I'm lazy and I felt like voiceing my opinions now. I will now finish the next part of this story. But first I must go save Shadow and Eclipse! And theres only one man who can help me...
THE PRESIDENT! I will return when I have gained the alliance of the President and his giant verticle nuclear powered battle mech! Maverick AWAY!

Shadow: Hey is anyone going to get me out of this friggin this!? Come on guys stop with the electrodes!

(I look forward to reading the next part of this story, in addition to the second sequal)

I truthfully don't know what to say except that this is awesome, perfect, and most definatley interesting! Keep up the great work!!!!!!

now that's just fucking evil!
but the story still kicks majior ass!

I really enjoyed this series with the first story. It was interesting, and despite it’s “over the top” moments, it still turned out to be a fairly good read. But, I cannot bring myself to even finish what the two of you have written here for a sequel. I recommend that you just leave this series as one fanfic and delete this sequel. It's completely ridiculous and seems to be just going downhill as it puts the original to shame.

Nice work. It's well-written, which puts it in the top 20% of all fanfiction. Problem is, you're expanding on an already great fic - the original, duh - as such, Chapter Five onwards sounds somewhat filler-material-ish. Put simply - good, but I know you can do better. Perhaps by building on Amy's (I hate to use this term) human traits? She may be a mother but by God she isn't perfect. The Amy Rose of the games wouldn't immediately settle down into maternal bliss.

I could also throw in the obligatory 'LESS YAP MORE FAP HURRRR', but that'd be mean. =P

all i can say is 'whoa'

shadow got pwan3d