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July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good work here! Your diction and style are wonderful to read, and I hope you will continue this story.
Leon joins back up with the S.T.A.R.S...that will be interesting, their reactions to his current status and last mission! And then they take on UMBRELLA again. Goodness, what does the company have in store for them this time? ;) I'd be delighted to help if you need anything! (but it really looks like you're all set. Great job! ^^)
Leon joins back up with the S.T.A.R.S...that will be interesting, their reactions to his current status and last mission! And then they take on UMBRELLA again. Goodness, what does the company have in store for them this time? ;) I'd be delighted to help if you need anything! (but it really looks like you're all set. Great job! ^^)
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it!
so give me morrrrrrrrrrre
so give me morrrrrrrrrrre
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this a lot! I can't wait for the confrontation to happen. Everything seems in fairly good order, grammatically, but I'm really not much of a good judge of that ^_^
I always thought that Rebecca and Leon would hit it off real well, myself, but I guess that's just me:)
Can't wait for your next post!
I always thought that Rebecca and Leon would hit it off real well, myself, but I guess that's just me:)
Can't wait for your next post!
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this! This is strangely well-written (um, considering the quality of the other stories here--no offense to the others) and the story seems really full of potential. I'm incredibly interested as to where you're going to proceed from here. Is Leon gonna hook up with his old friends? Is this the last we see of Ashley? (I personally hope not.) At any rate, I will be looking forward to the next chapter--and that's not something I usually do with a lot of the stories on this site. ;)
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow~ i really like this so far! please continue! * gives you a cookie *
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You got my interest peaked and i must say your writing style is great ^^ You are doing fabulous! So please update soon cause i would like to read more and see where this story is going ^^