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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SonAmy STILL isn't my Thang. But you make it believable. And coming from me, that's a big compliment. You do it while not making it seem really stupid, or putting them out of character or having Amy cutting herself - please don't have Amy cut herself, it sucks. Amy is not an Emo. I still prefer ShadAmy, and I'm not swayed, but you're making me see a situation in which Sonic and Amy could actualy get together. Shame it involves a kid dying...
I THINK I can see where this is going. Shadow said he was the father to help Amy out, right? RIGHT?!
Continue, and I'll continue reading whenever I can bear it!
I THINK I can see where this is going. Shadow said he was the father to help Amy out, right? RIGHT?!
Continue, and I'll continue reading whenever I can bear it!
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February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...All right, I've caught up...
...I'm speechless...You know, for a second there, I almost forgot that these were Sonic characters. You've got something pretty good going on here, and I honestly want to see more.
...You know, I should add that I love your use of the "it's-not-what-it-looks-like" scenarios, and I like how you drop the characters where it will have the most effect (Rouge and Shadow). It really ups the ante...
...Keep it up. E-mail me the next chapter, if you can!
...I'm speechless...You know, for a second there, I almost forgot that these were Sonic characters. You've got something pretty good going on here, and I honestly want to see more.
...You know, I should add that I love your use of the "it's-not-what-it-looks-like" scenarios, and I like how you drop the characters where it will have the most effect (Rouge and Shadow). It really ups the ante...
...Keep it up. E-mail me the next chapter, if you can!
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...I loved it!
...There was one slight grammatical error in the whole thing (at least, I think it was a grammatical error), but, wow, I was really taken away! The language and heart you put into this was nothing short of spectacular! The narrative was a nice touch and beautifully presented!
...I wish they got things working up soon...I want to register and review like a true author to AFF.Net would...
...Keep it up!
...There was one slight grammatical error in the whole thing (at least, I think it was a grammatical error), but, wow, I was really taken away! The language and heart you put into this was nothing short of spectacular! The narrative was a nice touch and beautifully presented!
...I wish they got things working up soon...I want to register and review like a true author to AFF.Net would...
...Keep it up!
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love thise story/ Great job. Can't wait for an update.
It is a great stpry.
Pheonix
It is a great stpry.
Pheonix
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting! And a nice development in chapter 3 - I can decinately see a hungry pink hedgehog fainting from a shock like that. Please update soon!
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap. I hate and despise SonAmy fics. ShadAmy's the way to go for me. Still is.
But somehow you have managed to do the impossible. You have managed to renew my faith in the Impossible Relationship. Not to the extent that it's my favourite. But hot damn, normally SonAmy fics seem so damn unrealistic with their stupid 'We're going out but I'm damned if I'll tell you what made me change my mind about her' plots. Hey, that's the way to go with the Just Another Series...
I loved the first sex scene. Yeah, it does feel like you're having a poker shoved up your vagina. Having an orgasm is often the last thing on your mind the first time. And the realistic pregnancy. Some people have morning sickness the day after sex. Which is ridiculous.
It's so... emotional. I swear, oh, it's good. And trust me, I HATE SonAmy normally. I can't wait for the next chapter. You kick ass. This fic is easily as good as ARAAT. Just different. I can't think of anything actually bad with this fic. I'm going to read it again.
But somehow you have managed to do the impossible. You have managed to renew my faith in the Impossible Relationship. Not to the extent that it's my favourite. But hot damn, normally SonAmy fics seem so damn unrealistic with their stupid 'We're going out but I'm damned if I'll tell you what made me change my mind about her' plots. Hey, that's the way to go with the Just Another Series...
I loved the first sex scene. Yeah, it does feel like you're having a poker shoved up your vagina. Having an orgasm is often the last thing on your mind the first time. And the realistic pregnancy. Some people have morning sickness the day after sex. Which is ridiculous.
It's so... emotional. I swear, oh, it's good. And trust me, I HATE SonAmy normally. I can't wait for the next chapter. You kick ass. This fic is easily as good as ARAAT. Just different. I can't think of anything actually bad with this fic. I'm going to read it again.