rate_review Reviews

deveras que esta estoria es bonita [this truely is a beautiful story]

Disaster Master dice que esta estoria es mejor que ARAAT [Disaster Master says this story is better than ARAAT]

y en diciendo la verda, a veses le creo [and to tell the truth, at times i believe him]

*pendejo se cachetea* [*pendejo slaps himself*]

no, no es mejor. esta en nivel con ARAAT [no, its not better. its on par with ARAAT]

espero leer mas pronto! [i'm hoping to read more soon!]

To Harley:

Try being realistic please. At what point in time during any Sonic storyline did Shadow and Amy seem like they would be a good pairing? It's not canon, they hardly even know each other besides the "hug" in SA2 and her cameo in Shadow the Hedgehog (the game). ShadAmy = Moronic, I have to say.

To author:

Very nice story, I hope to see more.

You know, I think I would have preferred it if Knuckles and Rouge hadn't got back together, what with her being a filthy slut and all. But even so, you made it seem like it could happen because they're both idiots. Just because I don't want it to happen doesn't mean it's not written well.

And I still don't like SonAmy much. But you're actually making it readable for me!

I don't think Knuckles would hit a woman... but hey, he was angry and I'll let you get away with it this time.

So, on the whole, damn well done.

SURFING ELEPHANTS OF MARS! So, the fic is almost over eh? Well as much as I'd like to keep reading this, I must say that nothing lasts forever. But, if you are going to end this fic soon, make it end with a bang. If you get me. Also, this fic is so good, it deserves a theme song. Might I suggest, "Right Here" by Staind. It'd be a perfect (and cute) theme song for this fic, as in Sonic's POV referring to Amy. Here are the lyrics to prove it:

I know I've been mistaken
But just give me a break and see the changes that I've made
I've got some imperfections
But how can you collect them all and throw them in my face

But you always find a way to keep me right here waiting
You always find the words to say to keep me right here waiting
And if you chose to walk away I'd still be right here waiting
Searching for the things to say to keep you right here waiting

I hope you're not intending
To be so condescending it's as much as i can take
and you're so independent
you just refuse to bend so I keep bending till I break

But you always find a way to keep me right here waiting
You always find the words to say to keep me right here waiting
And if you chose to walk away I'd still be right here waiting
Searching for the things to say to keep you right here waiting

I've made a commitment
I'm willing to bleed for you
I needed fulfillment
I found what I need in you

Why can't you just forgive me
I don't want to relive all the mistakes I've made along the way
But I always find a way to keep you right here waiting
I always find the words to say to keep you right here waiting

But you always find a way
To keep me right here waiting
You always find the words to say to keep me right here waiting
And if I chose to walk away would you be right here waiting
Searching for the things to say to keep me right here waiting

Please take this song into consideration. Have a wonderful day!

(To all you cum garglers out there that aren't reviewing this fic: I hope you all get anally raped by some guy living in a box behind Wal-Mart.)

RECTUM BREATH FROM HELL! You've made my day by updating this fic. I guess you can't update it faster like I asked, thanks to work. Yes, work can be a pain in the ass can't it? But it's necessary. I'll still get you songs that you want. Think of it as a thanks for making such a beautiful fic. And if you don't want any songs, that's cool too. I'll be waiting for the next update, and once again, Have a WONDERFUL day!

My god! Don't tell me she had a miscarriage! It'll make me cry! Having Amy lose her baby this way will totally screw up her and Sonic's relationship,....I think. I haven't read this in a while, I've been missing out on a very superb piece of literature. I'm going to be patient now, but I'll be damn happy when this story gets updated. And I'm sorry if I upset you in any way. You still got it! Keep it comin'! Later!

I liked it. I really hope u post the next chapter soon!

GREAT MONKEY MOLESTERS! -jumps up and down- Another excellent chapter! NO! Another PERFECT chapter! Queenie is right! Sonic/Amy rules! And no one will convince me otherwise. -guy in the corner says "Sonic/Amy sucks"- -Disaster Master hits him with sledge hammer- Any one who dares to say that will get the same fate. I saw that ARAAT3 was also updated, but I just had to read this one first. This fic surpasses, NO! This fic DOMINATES all the others. And I don't care if everyone here disagrees with me, they can all burn in the bowels of hell! I love every word of this fic. There's just one tiny, ity, bity, teenie, weenie, little problem with it........THE DELAYS ARE TOO FUCKING LONG! You take WAY too long to update it. If you update it faster, I'll give you something. Seriously, I can get you songs! If there's a song you want email me the name of it and I'll attach it to the reply. I put my email address in this time. Update soon! Have a WONDERFUL day! ^_^ -guy in the corner gets up and says, "You're pathetic!"- -Disaster Master throws him in pool of sharks- Fuck you cum gargler!

SonicxAmy rules. 'Nuff said.

HOLY FREAKIN BANANAS! WOW! WORK OF ART! I never took the time to read this story before because I was too lazy, but DAMN! I'm glad I finally read it! This is awesome! This story greatly surpasses A Rose and a Thorn in excellence! Drum roll please! (drums roll) I GIVE YOU A 5 OUT OF 5! A PERFECT SCORE! I've never given anyone a perfect score before, not even Harley! But you've made it so there's nothing about this fic I don't like! Not only is the storyline excellent, but you also write like a genius! This fic even made me cry! (any butt fucker that makes fun of me, will get their eyeballs pulled out of their head and shoved into their ass!)No story has ever made me cry, your story is so emotional, as Harley says. It is sooooooo adorable! Every chapter makes me go AWWWWWW! at some point. This fic just proves that Sonic/Amy will always triumph over all other pairings, sorry Harley but Shadow/Amy is kind of creepy no matter how emotional you make it! Well I have to get going, but please update! You've got me addicted! UPDATE! Have a nice day!