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for Caught in the Tub

by TheLady

person Invader Meow (the accountless x_X)
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im not sure if i reviewed this story or not yet.. BUT IT ROCKS! Theres something about it that i cant put my finger on, its different than the other sheelos stories ive read, but it is an AWESOME story, please update ASAP :D!!

poor zelos, i dun like to see him saaad
person Anon
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is best storie i have ever readed, and i truely LOVE this!
person Anima Sage Kurai
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Arg! Poor Zelos! I feel so bad for him! Man, Sheena, why did you have to ignore him! And that blonde girl, I forgot her name already! Haha, Marion? What? Anyway, she's an annoying Zelos groupie and deserves to be killed and/or slapped. This was another great chapter, and I hope you update soon! Yeah, your updating Zelos' Punishment! Thank you for writting such a good Sheelos fic! *throws you Zelos plushies* Keep writting!
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!
person lugiamania
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally! Someone wries a Sheelos lemon! Thank you!!
person WDR
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY a Zheelos lemon. God we needed one! And you have a touch for lemons, it seems - both this and Zelos' Punishment are just nice. Nice, nice, teh sex, always nice.

Anyway, I liked this. Zelos-in-a-bathtub is too sexy, and one can't help but to smirk at Sheena's reaction. It's believable, at least in the Universe of Happy Lemons. Nice first chapter, onwards now...!
person WDR
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY a Sheelos lemon. God we needed one! And you have a touch for lemons, it seems - both this and Zelos' Punishment are just nice. Nice, nice, teh sex, always nice.

Anyway, I liked this. Zelos-in-a-bathtub is too sexy, and one can't help but to smirk at Sheena's reaction. It's believable, at least in the Universe of Happy Lemons. Nice first chapter, onwards now...!
person Jenn
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hawt! I loved teh sex! Can't wait to see what happens next!!
person Anima Sage Kurai
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! This was really good! ANd I don't really like reading het. couples,
I love yaoi and good stuff like that. But I like Sheelos, so I had to
read this. And it was amazing. The only thing that bothered me was
Lloyd being a dumb ass and coming into the room with out knocking...
-.-; Ok! On to the next chapter!
person Anima Sage Kurai
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Arg! Lloyd ruins EVERYTHING! And he is clueless too.
Hehe, this was also a nice chapter. I am looking forward to
reading the next one! [p.s, I was the one who gave you a 5/5]