rate_review Reviews

Of course an English degree is being put to good use! If evolving a PWP into a full-blown story isn't good English, then... um... somebody needs to get their priorities straight, yeah, that's it. ^_^() Eagerly awaiting the next update! Yaaaaaaay for good porn!

Aww, how sweet! I wonder how the date will go...

Wow, I _so_ believed this was going to be the last chapter. I mean, it would've done wonders as a last chapter! It gives a nice feeling of closure and this "oooh so finally it'll be more than sex!" thing, but I'm actually pretty glad you decided to keep it going. I adore this couple and they just don't get enough love around here...

So anyway, these two last chapters were real good, each on their own style. I mean, one is still pretty much PWP while the other doesn't even have the first P and instead has lots of the other P. The balance came out strangely nice. I'm looking forward to seeing how you continue with this!

Yay an update! ^^ its getting to be a longer story! Thats good cause i love your writing! *hug* please update soon okee? or ill throw angry chibis at you >>

nicely done. I really like your writing.

Honor for this! This is awesome! Nicely done!

Will we get more soon? cant wait for more ^^

Hawt Wants more!

Yay for the new chapter! The situation you wrote here is one I have thought of a number of times before... it's just so plausible! Anyway, great work once more. I'm glad you decided to continue with this ^^

I like this specialy much because main character is zelos, he is my idol and my hero