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for Albert's Odyssey

by Vedocorban

person Anon
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I laughed. We were supposed to laugh, right? Bone dragon... Hehehe.
person Anon
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee hee. Hee hee. Aw, man. I haven't laughed that hard in some time.
person blue mouse
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's a beautiful story
person elregrs
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I stand in awe of the struggles presented in this tale. Poor Caesar, who apparently had one up on his elder brother, being put in his place once again! And what thought-out symbolism and analogies between war strategy and Albert's plight! No greater tale has ever been told.

There's just one problem. I mean, come on, Liukan? A little hard to believe that, after fifteen years, this guy would still be LIVING...for surgical procedures? Everyone knows he's more into medicinal herbs! Sheesh! Other than that, everything was perfectly plausible.

Good work, stranger.