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by kidavi

person whacko!
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How horribly, sickeningly, cruelly wonderful! You've taken that line that not too many people tiptoe across, and splattered lean meat, blood, and masochist's cum all over it. Congrats
person Silver Wolf
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your wording is very good..... Yep yep, always has been. Write more!
person Rane Aria
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this fic! I adore the other two, but I love how they all tie in with each other! Keep up the great work!
person SawenEsteliel
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! My poor Vergie. I love how you have described everything...it is very detailed. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease write more soon, am loving it. xXx
person whacko
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ouch...beautiful piece, if not a bit dire. Keep going on these...