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for The Wrong place at the wrong time

by AnnAnime

person Melina
schedule December 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey man!
Great story! It's very suspenseful, and has a great ending coming for it! Just to let you know, this is my first review, and I don't really know what I'm supposed to say in these things XDXD! So as a starter, I'll just give an idea maybe? I was thinking that ganandorf gets banished from the castle and seeks help from Zelda in order to save link. Not going to go into to much detail, but I thnik that would be a good place to start, give or take. Anyways, great story, keep it up! Oh, btw you think you can give a rough time of when the next chapter will be out? Thanks!
Regards, Melina
schedule April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love this story!
person Okami
schedule December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Let me say this so there are no ideas about me being a yaoi hater. I love it and I love this pairing.

There are a large number of grammar issues; everything from typos to tens issues. Everyone in this story seems to be ether ooc or bland. The relationship feels forced. And oh so many other things. BUT!!! There is hope for this story. You just need a betta( someone who can be honest is best.)
person Kat the Koneko
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
will there be an update?
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sleeping on keybord*
person Sana-chan
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Anan is me!
person n/a
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story but you need to use a spell check. I am not trying to flame or anything. Anyuways as for the name situation I think the name jerimiah or kevin will do nicely. please keep updating
person Sana-Chan
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Come on next chapter :(
person Anon
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
still waitin for a new chapty :(
person Anon
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Come on come on!