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for Means to an End

by SkyStillCries

person guestomatic
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_o... you wouldn't believe how on target you are with the sex you are writing, the virgin sensations, and the first inexperiences and pain of sex.
person guestomatic
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:x quite sadistic is he not? Poor Stoat
person theQuietWind
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>:3 I read this once, and I came back and read it again. I love teh lemon. Magus seems very much in character in it. *.* <--starry eyes
person theQuietWind
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was REALLY surprised that you didn't over do Flea. You gave her that slightly hum-drum I'm bored flavor that 'he/she' seems to have. ;p
person theQuietWind
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD Ah, that's the way Mystics should be.
Love it darling. Love it.
And I like the fact Magus wasn't instantly all - wow I'm in love with you and I need your help.
HEY I've read some good stories like that-
but this, this is refreshing, yo.
KEEP IT UP KUPO!!