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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. It's bittersweet to me, knowing that Henry is okay, but not okay. I like the fact you didn't delve into too much detail with the sex (though, even if you did, it would no doubt be just as wonderful)but left enough to get a nice mental picture. Damn...poor Henry and Eileen...and everyone actually...lol. I liked the part where Cynthia said "Henry, this isn't a dream is it?" it was one of your shorter segments...but for some reason it summed up the feeling of hopelessness and finality of the outcome. Misery loves company...
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is perfect work, absolutely purrrfect. I love the pairings set up too and I cannot wait until you write the next chapter.
Please keep it up. I'll be waiting. ^_^
Please keep it up. I'll be waiting. ^_^
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm enamoured with Silent Hill 4 and this story magnificently captures that sense of isolation, hopelessness, confusion, but in earnest. The interludes with the other victims like Richard and Jasper were a very nice touch. Can we expect future SH4 centric stories from you?
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely beautiful! At times, it's even cute. Eileen's relationship with Walter is especially touching, for some reason...something I liked imagining while playing the game.
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is beautiful. This is exactly the sort of thing I want to read as far as SH4 fanfiction is concerned. It's beautiful, haunting, scary, and just a little hopeless; all in all it's great! You have such a way with words, how one sentence can convey so much emotion, can make the vision of even this cold-hearted wench that is myself blur. I'm definately going to keep my eye out for any more of your fiction!
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Perfect. Blindingly, bastardly perfect. This is the single most darkly glorious thing I've ever read in this brothel of cheap smut. I don't need to say you've "captured" or "stayed true" to anything, because you've uplifted something that already had vestigial wings. This is, in fact, exactly what I was meaning to say when I turned away from the game, its world still knotted around me, head and heart.
DAMN. Just damn. Art, this--thank you and, simply, perfect.
DAMN. Just damn. Art, this--thank you and, simply, perfect.