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for Zelos' Punishment

by TheLady

person kourya
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story and I hope you update soon! I was kinda looking forward to Lloyd getting involved. Well, keep it up!
~ Kourya
person wingeddancerremix@yahoo.com.mx
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, that was just good. I have to agree with Zelos on the situation being too weird not to be amusing - all the stuff he said while they were at it had me laughing. Specially "I can't cook! But that makes me hot, too!". Poor Zelos, being caught like that.... he's lucky Sheena didn't kill him right there.... if I ever catch a friend dancing in a purple speedo (chances are it'll happen some day) I'll laugh so hard...
person Megami
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great and so funny! >w< Loved the Yuan/Zelos/Kratos threesome >w< hope Lloyd joins and screw our cute little Zelos some more xD
person Lill
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the 2nd chapter just as much I loved the 1st! I really love this fic!
It's great! Keep it up!

Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
person Anima Sage Kurai
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, although I do feel bad for Zelos! *tear tear* That loser!
I loved the first chapter and I loved this one even better! Haha,
Zelos snickering, rubbing his hands together and grining is just
too much of a funny sight! *laughs* I hope you countinue, PWP,
Romance in it or not!
person Anima Sage Kurai
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! This was awsome! And I like this couple ALOT! I love you...!!
"Don't over do it!" Kratos, don't say that anymore. Please make another chapter!
I love this!!!!
person yamato795
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, that wasn't bad for writing it fast! I'd definitely like to see another chapter! And wouldn't it be funny if Zelos tried to get Kratos back and just ended up getting 'punished' again? ^__^
person Lill
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY GOOD! O_O! I LIKED IT!!!!!!

Heh...MELIKE! ^_^