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for Promise Me

by CrimsonSuicide

person Iron Man
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woot! A bit of grammar errors but WOOT!!!
person Alex.M
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, thank you , thank you finally some one wrote a sheena and lloyd fic i mean seriusly each time i come to this page its all men sex but you are different and i thank you so much for writting a fic about my favorite couple of TOS also if you can can you write another one please about lloyd and sheena.
person Mic123
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good, I loved it all the way
person Mr. E
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, This was your first Fan fic? It was incredible! Keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. Hard to believe it's the first one you've written. Keep up the good work. ^_^
person Pooperson
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shit, my penis blew up... other than that, SHELOYD PWNS ALL THE TOS PAIRINGS!!!

This fanfic rocks. It's better than all the other stupid yaoi, yuri, and other pairing lemosn out there.
person Gelgarin
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tis good, tis very good.

Sheena doesn't actually into her own trap on th mountain pass, she just falls down a mining shaft.

Other than that however I found it both beleivable and entertaining, bout time we had a Sheena/Loyd fic, my personal favorate pairing.
person Chikky
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG this was extremely good. I want more. More of them... you write reallt well. *goes off to your page to look at your other stories*
person Subaru
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was well done. I had the same pairing (Lloyd x Sheena) the second time through the game, and this story is very believable next to the original, its just that Lloyd's lines were a little uncharacteristic. Sheena seemed right on though.
person Al
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. A few spelling errors but nothing to lessen the enjoyment of the story. Looking forward to what you write next.