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for For you Brother

by SamuraiDevilPirate

person Lina
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god I LOVE this story! Please keep going!
person Leoth
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
T____________T Nooooooooooooooo! Pls dont let him die.
awesome ficcy! ^_^
person PoutyKitten
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Purrrlezz, update very soon. This is really good writing. Can't wait to see what will happen next. Well done first chapter. Much love to ya and continue on, purrrlezz? Until next time. Later. lol. ~purrs~
person Jawbreaker
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Just this darn good. MORE, please?
person YuffieAyumi
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-cries-Your story I have to say, I just LOVE IT! Your version of the past was interesting and I liked it. Oh, poor Dante. Please, please, continue and update as soon as possible. -sniffles- Good job and all the luck to your hard work of writing this fic here. LoL. C-ya.
person Silver Wolf
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh hey I love angst. I did something very similar to this. "This Devil Cries." It only has two chapters right now, but it's Yaoi. Ooh, scary right? WRITE MORE U EVIL *BLEEP*, HOW CAN U END IT HERE?! --.-- He's not dead anyway, for him to remain dead is what happens in my story.
person cas
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg. I'm crying. How could you go and make him die! T_T Very good. But you make me so sad. T_T T_T Is there a part two? Dante can't die! He has demon blood! Noooooooooooooo! ~cries and gives thumbs-up~
person Lenne
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. No, not Dante. Vergil was only some feet away. One of my favorite part when Dante says "I love you" to Vergil. Very heart-warming at that point between the twins and another when Vergil was running to his aid was also, sweet. The way you wrote this story is pretty good. The flashback was understandable and warm. I'm so hooked to know what will happen on the next chapter, but I'm a patience person, so I'll wait until you update whenever you can. Therefore, carry on and this is a good start by the way. Keep up the good work! Love ya already. Ciao. -lenne
person Rikireno
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gotta hand it to ya. Good start and amazing story. The flashback was cool. Everything else, I give a ten. I'm willing to read more. Lots of love to you. My day can't get much better. Well done and keep it comin. Check ya later, yo. Peace.