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for My Lost Desire

by DirtyHentaiGoddess

person Hikari
schedule November 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, supercool!!! I want see the next chapter!!
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...That is it? Aw man!! So interesting...If you get this review I beg of you to continue it!!!
person Anon
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see more on this one. It looks really interesting, poor lloyd.
person Vashuthetyphoon
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O OMG that was great please write more.I loved it..
person Anima Sage Kurai
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...I really hope you update this...! Yggy is so horrid, Kratos is no
devil! Arg! I feel so bad for Lloyd! But I love this story, it's so dark
and evil, and crap like that. CANDLE WAX! One time the power went out,
and I had a candle. The wax dripped on my hand...And let me tell you, dude
IT HURT LIKE HELL! And it wasn't dripping on any wounds, I wonder how LLoyd felt!
5/5!
person sirchnotlih
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I remember you. Great to know you're back to writing. I really like this story. Keep it up!
person Satanic Mechanic
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor poor Lloyd, he really didn't deserve any of that. Man, but it seems very like Yggy to do something like that. I'd imagine he wouldn't like to be ignored at all.

I hope to see another chapter! It'd be interesting to see maybe...Mithos turn Lloyd against Kratos without even knowing who he is. Or seeing Kratos's reaction when he figures out who Mithos's new slave really is.
person SpiderMoon
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a horrible fic. Why did I read it? Because it was horribly FUN! XD I mean, yea, painful, horrible, despicible, and yet... interesting twist. Poor Lloyd. Mithos has prooooblems. >_>
person Anon
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Scawy!!

Yep, great response, can't wait for another chapter.
person Lill
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O! OH. MY. GOD!

I didn't like the part where Mithos/Yggdrasil told Lloyd that Kratos is an evil devil!
But the rest I liked! OH YEAH! That was HOT!
You're a VERY GOOD Author!

Heh...MELIKE! ^_^

Poor Lloyd...Heh...Great fic! I loved it!

Keep up the good work! ^_^