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Whao. The incediant was hawt. I thought Shadow was going to hump Sonic. I would have. And that kiss was great but Sonic should have been awake for it so he could make out back. Feel kinda bad for Amy though. Maybe this could be a threesome.

Holy shit dude. That was cruel, stopping the sex before it got depth. You have to be a real part between them in the story. They need to sleep together like, pronto. Just don't make Sonic a total wuss. Keep him just the way you have him when it comes to Shadow and you'll be fine. Don't make this Sonic and Amy please. It's done too much alreaady. But a threesome would be fine.

You didn't post the link--but thanks for the gesture!

As for you chapter, it really was great. It was like the climax of a soap opera drama, only more enjoyable. I love the way Knuckles confessed and then Shadow's little outburst followed by everyone ganging up on Rouge. Fantastic. Eggman's interruption wasn't what I excepted, which is why I loved it so much. And I love how you describe the effect the ring has on Sonic, espically with the eyes. It was very easy to picture in my head and now I'm excited to know exactly what it does.

Your story is so much fun to read and I really enjoy it. Please update very soon.

Very nice, original story so far. It really peeks the interest and has a reader begging for more. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Wow. You gotta update, this is really great and I wanna know what happens to Sonic!

Okay, I'll be honest with you. It took me some time to get over some of the more "mature" content of this story thus far, but after reading more of the chapters from that point and seeing as how you were developing character motivation so well, I now realize that the "slash" was most essential. I'm impressed! Most people wouldn't have gone as far as you did with the theme and still manage to maintain character integrity AND tell an inthralling tale simultaeously (which would explain why I don't read most fan fiction). I'm not done reading it yet, but I'm sure that I'll be satisfied with the content.

Whoa, intense chapter there. Knuckles rocks this chapter!!!!!!1111 He was totally tryin to kick Shadow's butt though I think Shadow would have won if Sonic didn't break it up but it was funny to see them all gang up on Rouge. What's wrong with Sonic cause he was really sick at the end thanks to Robotnic and stuff. Is Shadow still gonna be mad at him or is Sonic gonna be mad at Shadow and stuff.

You gotta update!

It's about time we saw some focus on Knuckles. Another great chapter, as you probably already know. It was funny that none of them paid attention to Eggman as he crash, though what happened to Tails? And I'd really like to know what the collar does now. I also want to know when the non-con is coming into the story and why, because it doesn't seem like it would.

Update soon, we're curious on this side of the globe.

What a long story this is. Not that I'm complaining but I find it unusual that a fanfiction writer puts so much detail and length to their chapters. Nice touch. Though be weary of having your chapters too long, or people might loose the will to read them halfway through. While it had a slow start, staying with it was well worth it but some people may not realize it and give up.

I'm enjoying it so far. It's been very funny as a whole and the portrayel of the characters are shockingly head on despite the relationships that are explored in the story. It's rather sad when I can picture the entire story happening in my head or wishing it was a comic book.

You even managed to make certain characters I don't like tolerable. (I mean Cream and Shadow.)

I see you like to end the majority of your chapters in cliffhangers. I'll be weary of that in the future as I must admit: your last one is good.

It's rotten what you're doing to Amy though. I felt so sorry for her in the last chapter. I think I would bawl too. I just can't understand how so many people here want this to be Shadon story. I'm Sonamy all the way and have been since Sonic CD? when she first appeared. I really hope you give her a break in the up coming chapters because I can't imagin Sonic actually wanting to be with Shadow over her. He's got to realize by now that those feelings are real--damn Rouge for making him second guess them!

Knuckles is officially my hero now, thanks alot. I barely liked him before and now you've made him the champion of hurt woman everywhere. I hate to say it but I got rather excited when he admitted his feelings for Rouge. I felt like his Amen corner screaming "You tell her Knuckles, preach!" at the computer screen. Laughable but shameful, I admit.

And thank you for not having Sonic run into Shadow's arms in fluff style fashion as they admit their love for one another. As a matter of fact, I was slightly surprised by the fight at the end. I didn't think Sonic would get so upset about the unknown kiss but then after having his nightmares and already being shaken and disturbed, it's understandable.

I suppose I don't have to tell you you should update with a hurry.

If you don't mind, here's my email address: azareeSakura@msn.com Please email me when you update your story next time, I want to keep up with this one.

One more thing: you didn't post that link in your last chapter.

Don't put him with Amy. Leave it Shadon. More fun to read.