rate_review Reviews

Considering I'm not the only person that signs Anon on this story, I'll add a title to mine so you know who I am now. ;o)

Another great edition to the story, though darker than the other chapters. I like your Eggman too, he's not overly silly like in Sonic X, which I hate. I also like all your chapter titles, espically the subtitles. They're cute and funny sometimes.

Could a you write me a SonAmy story? No non-con or anything and it can be like, one-shot. And by no means, abondon this story to write it if that would have to happen. But you know...please? Cause I'd really like a nice, SonAmy story! With no Shadow messing everything up. ;o}

Keep up the writing.

Good Stuff.

This isn't an actual review so let me apologize from the start. It's more of a plea and rant. =-_-+=

1. I'm one of your many readers that got hooked onto your Teen Titans story, but you haven't updated in months. At first I thought you just weren't writing anymore, considering that fact you hadn't updated any of your other stories really. But it pains me to see that you're so frequently updating this story when you won't make a new chapter for a really great piece of work you've already written. Since you more than likely read these reviews, I decided to post my plea here instead: could you please update and maybe even finish Evolution? It didn't even get to the fun part with Slade and what you have so far is agonizingly good and it deserves some attention as well.

2. Do you do request for fanfictions? If so, then I'd like to request one. I can be a one-shot or short story, but would you mind doing a Castlevania story for me? And please, not for Symphony of the Night: That's overly done already. Actually, I'd like it to be about the Castlevania 3 cast or set in the time of Castlevania 3. I've always loved that particular game and I'd love to see a good fanfiction artist write about it. If you don't know what Castlevania is, I'll be more than happy to provide a link to information or even recommend the game to play first hand.

If you say yes, then I'll email you. Thanks for you time.

An update!!!!!!! Okay, it was a fun chapter cause I liked the fighting with the snake and brief intermission with Tails and Knuckles. I like the way you make Eggman evil without having to make him a bastard. He's usually either silly or a bastard, one or the other. Sonic was hiliarous to me in this chapter. He was such a jerk but he made it fun to read. He thought the entire thing was funny and didn't seem to care about what he said or who's feelings it hurt. But that was a mean shot he took at Shadow if he was talking about who I think he was. Really mean. Shadow should have kicked him!!! Does the ring make Sonic mean? Or does it do something else too? Cause I noticed he didn't stop being a jerk until the ring stopped glowing. And what about Rouge? They didn't just forget about her right? Sonic didn't seem to, from his insult and you already reference that Amy is still upset about it. Shadow was just ranting at the end so I wasn't sure.

You have to update sooner this time! I want to know what's gonig to happen now!

Hm, interesting. Your story is changing. It started out as a lighthearted comedy before morphing into a dramatic love soap opera. And now it appears it's morphing into the darkness you promised in your warning in the first chapter, though both the humor and drama still stand. I find that it's odd, but in a good way. Not too much of any one genre that it won't drown a reader that isn't fond of it.

Though I must ask: how will you accomplish Sonic's feelings? He seems to like both Amy and Shadow and I just wonder which hedgehog he will actually end up with or at least, weigh more of his attention into before he does choose. I think the story will get far more interesting than it already is once that happens.

I look forward to reading more of your work. I might look into your other fanfictions.

Sonic better apologize to Amy PERIOD. He had no right to treat her like that when she was only concerned about him and she should have smacked him into oblivion for it. So I expect an apology on Sonic's behalf or I'll send the flying monkeys.

An unexcepted chapter. Again, long in length and not at all where I was excepting it to go in the ways of characters and writing. Sonic's brief stent into psychosis would have been great if he hadn't snapped at Amy. You just must not like Cream because she's barely in the story and not at all in the chapter. Knuckles seems to be the only one that out right didn't get upset at Rouge for her anticts. I think he at least, should fuss at her. And none of the other characters better not just magically forget because of more pressing matters like Sonic becoming in Shadow's own words: a jackass. Now isn't that calling the kettle black? Ha!

Stop being mean to Amy and put some Sonamy in the next chapter. Please? I'll make the sad puppy face. You know you can't resist that face!

Okay stop teasing now. You have to put in some Shadow/Sonic soon or I really will begin to think that you're making this Amy/Sonic. And I need to know this won't be Amy/Sonic.

mabey you should just make sonic fall in love with eggman! that would solve all our problems! but an actual idea on that whole thing. if you like this story enough mabey once you've finished this story go back and write what would have happend if sonic loved the other. Its just and idea though. anyway loved the battle with the robot andaconda(sp?) it was pretty leathal wasnt it? thanks for the new chapters!

Love this fic!

Can't stop from liking it.

damn people yaoi fanatics. I mean sheesh someitmes its ok but you reviewers are like ZOMG Amy/Sonic? Please stop!

^Thats very dumb since more than 75% of fics made on this site and others is all yaoi enough is enough. (yawn it is ver yannoying everything yaoi after awhile)


I like Shad/Sonic and Amy/Sonic. Thus leave it the love two some.... (well the other included things such as knuckles/Rouge)

Keep up the great work love this fic! *Fan now*