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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy I have a bowl of Golden Grahams. Because this chapter has officially ruined my day. Why must you deny Shadow the simple pleasure that is love? He and Sonic can't deny it forever. This story is going to bother me now until you give another update.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NO!!! It can't be a sonamy fic. It has to be sonadow.
I'm not one for sonamy and it's breakin' my heart that Shadow can't get the one he wants.
It's a really nice story all the same though.
I'm not one for sonamy and it's breakin' my heart that Shadow can't get the one he wants.
It's a really nice story all the same though.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful new chapter, a nice break from all the mayhem that's been going on in the story so far. Was that a real song or did you make it up? Either way, it was quite funny to read and a very sweet gesture. The only thing that could have made that funnier, is if he'd sung it to Shadow. That would have been priceless, simpley because the reaction would have been different.
Again, your story has peeked my interest, as Sonic still has to confront Shadow, espically after all the things that have occured thus far between them in the story.
Again, your story has peeked my interest, as Sonic still has to confront Shadow, espically after all the things that have occured thus far between them in the story.
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. I'm glad these scenes are getting a little more action-packed. I wasn't sure what to think about Shadow and his interaction with Amy and Sonic (actually, I still don't) but at least you used Rouge to keep things interesting. Haven't read "Jungle Boogie" yet, but I'm sure it'll only confirm my previous statements.
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's "summary" not "summery". Please use your spell-check (I'm pretty sure every program has one), or get a beta-reader. It will help readers understand what you're saying.
Other than that, I like it.
Other than that, I like it.
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I can't wait, update pleaze!!!!!!!
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A bit long but after I got into it, I stopped minding so much. Overall, a good story though Shadow liking Sonic scares me a bit. So I'll root for Amy just because the other ship is scary.
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Psycho Sonic! Able to piss off everyone he knows in a single sentence! Able to make Knuckles punch him with a single smirk.
No seriously, don't tell me this is the only time he'll be like that in the story. That was great. Put let me just say: the whole small eyed, blood-oil covered Sonic that smiles like a manic? Creepy as hell. Great detail in explaining what he looked like, I could picture it perfectly.
I hope Sonic gets everything cleared up the next chapter though, because everyone went from being pissed with Rouge to him. The chapter was great, I love when you include fight scenes, they're fun to read.
Though you had a line that cracked me up for like, five minutes: "I want my success to be a surprise!" "Isn't it always?" Great stuff there, so true.
I look forward to the next chapter and hope you update really soon!
No seriously, don't tell me this is the only time he'll be like that in the story. That was great. Put let me just say: the whole small eyed, blood-oil covered Sonic that smiles like a manic? Creepy as hell. Great detail in explaining what he looked like, I could picture it perfectly.
I hope Sonic gets everything cleared up the next chapter though, because everyone went from being pissed with Rouge to him. The chapter was great, I love when you include fight scenes, they're fun to read.
Though you had a line that cracked me up for like, five minutes: "I want my success to be a surprise!" "Isn't it always?" Great stuff there, so true.
I look forward to the next chapter and hope you update really soon!
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO!11111111 SONCI AMY PLEAZE! DUNT MAKE IT SHADOW! HE SUCKS!
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January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have a question before I begin: Why did you name the chapter 'Jungle Boogie'? I'm interested in knowing the answer.
As for the chapter: Very fun and interesting to read. You rule supreme at surprises. Shadow and Knuckles fighting together, Sonic becoming a jerk of sorts, Eggman willingly giving up Chaos Emeralds for some unknown reason. Cream might have fallen into a lake for all we know. And nothing has been resolved with Sonic/Amy/Shadow. And I love it. You're really keeping the reading on their toes with that--wanting their ship to sail, knowing there is a good possibility it could and just waiting for that special chapter when it's official. But then, your story is just funny and enjoyable to read reguardless. You know you're good when you can make a reader who doesn't like/didn't consider a ship second guess themselves.
It didn't exactly end on a cliffhanger this time, so I have no clue where you might be going. Which makes the wait for the next chapter all the more painful.
As for the chapter: Very fun and interesting to read. You rule supreme at surprises. Shadow and Knuckles fighting together, Sonic becoming a jerk of sorts, Eggman willingly giving up Chaos Emeralds for some unknown reason. Cream might have fallen into a lake for all we know. And nothing has been resolved with Sonic/Amy/Shadow. And I love it. You're really keeping the reading on their toes with that--wanting their ship to sail, knowing there is a good possibility it could and just waiting for that special chapter when it's official. But then, your story is just funny and enjoyable to read reguardless. You know you're good when you can make a reader who doesn't like/didn't consider a ship second guess themselves.
It didn't exactly end on a cliffhanger this time, so I have no clue where you might be going. Which makes the wait for the next chapter all the more painful.