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person Foxxy Love
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That asshole flip-flops more than the shoe of the same name. Fuck Sonic. Put Amy and Shadow together and leave his ass.
person Annie the Anon
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter proved to raise my interest in Knux/Rouge and I hope there will be more chapters with them in the future. I might sound like a dirty little pervert, but where is the non-con, sex, etc.? I'm rather happy your story isn't completely about smut. But a little smut would be nice. And not dream smut.

But it really was a nice chapter. The ending was very cute.
person Tairra
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do you need any information on the Castlevania story? Were you even going to write it?
person Anon
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't want to sound biased so I refuse to comment on that last part of the chapter. But if I pretend it doesn't exist or that it was some else, all and all, it was a great, funny edition to the story. It was nice to see you focus on the other relationships and the beginning with Rouge and Knuckles was great!!!! And I can't believe you put in the Chaotix guys. They're so great in your story, I love Charmy and Vector fighting about his singing. OMG, that was the best part of the entire storyh when Sonic and the guys tried sining to Amy so he could say sorry.

But pleaze-tell me that the last part doesn't mean what I think it does!!!!! OMG, I can't believe you you gotta update.
person MistressBellaMalfoy
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter, lots of spotlight on relationships. Knuckles and Rouge continue to become one of my favorite couples in this story. A very sweet start to the chapter. The reason for Shadow helping everyone was nice. Adding the Chaotix Detective Team was fabulous- they were great comedy relief in chapter. Tails and Cream were adorable. And despite I'm rooting for Shadon, the Sonamy in this chapter was good. The singing- a reference to Sonic Underground? And I figured Team Chaotix singing was a reference to their move from Sonic Heroes.

Quick questions: Did Shadow find the last Chaos Emerald? And the Chaos Emeralds that Tails has, why do they effect Sonic? And what happens when you add more to the ring or all of them? Will we find out soon? And speaking of Sonamy: is that the official ship for Sonic now? Or will Shadow still have chance?

person Algorind
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You update quick. Or I got to the story late. Either way, that was a great chapter. Knuckles is my favorite character so I really enjoyed the beginning. Or any part with Knuckles in it. Not fond of Rouge but the fact that she went so far just to claim Knuckles makes me like her in this story.

You also included Espio and that made my day.

And I'm happy Sonic kissed someone other than Shadow. Overall, nice.
person Maddi_Chan
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Kam, how could you. My heart is in so much pain right now. And it started so good too and then blasphamy. I need a drink.
person Shooting_Star
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks, I look forward to reading it.

Sonic's apology was funny and the scene in the garden made me squeal in delight. It made me so happy that Amy finally got to be with Sonic. And if they become a couple, wow, how is Shadow going to react to this? I really can't wait to read the next chapter, I really wanna see how Shadow is gonna react to Sonic and Amy now.
person Draconis
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
By far, my favorite chapter in the story. It was so funny that it made my sides hurt! Nice touch adding Chaotix, I totally love that team.

Though the ending is probably going to piss a lot of people off. I'm okay, Shadow has had his parts, Amy might as well have hers too. Just as long as *cough*SHADOW*cough* wins.

But now it really will be interesting between Shadow and Amy. It's obvious Shadow still likes Sonic but Sonic has made a move in Amy's direction and now she's actually got a leg to stand on. And then there's the ring that makes people psycho. So this story has gotten very interesting.

I can't wait for another update!!! Pleaze don't make us wait long!
person Shadow's Bane
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Obviously you didn't hear me. I said make me think this WASN'T a Sonamy story. So let me help you.

~Smacks Amy with her own piko stick~

There. Now go back to Shadon before I release the army.