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person Draconis
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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(")_(") That chapter made my bunny happy. The entire chapter was good, poor Tails, Shadow finding out about Sonic and Amy. From Cream, OMG! And then there is Knuckls and Rouge. OMG, that part was just fantastic! It's exactly how I thought a part like that would go, seeing as who was in it. Right on mark there, I loved it! And Sonic was so funny at the end! I was so happy he wasn't a stick in the mud about it. But is Knuckles gonna tell Rouge what he was thinking about before? And has Shadow gone to find Sonic? Or blow up something? My gosh, you totally gotta update this story, I can not wait!!!!
person Anon
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn that made me horney.
person N/A
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written, I like what you've done with the characters, especially Rouge, and generally want to let you know I await the next chapter with bated breath, and am thoroughly enjoying this.

As an aside though, I hope you don't mind if I put forward a notion for Sonic's choice regarding lovers: Both. There is nothing to say Sonic, or for that matter, the whole Sonic planet, is monogomous that I know of, so why can't he just choose both? It seems to be the most elegant answer.
person Algorind
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You don't have to write another part to this story. That chapter was great enough. Thanks for making my day a little brighter. Awsome Knux. Just plan sweet.
person Popcorn Oracle
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Been kinda lazy about reviewing latley I guess^^;. Anyway, I'm not going to be immature like a lot of these people and just get angry and whine and want Sonadow if it ends up the other way. But... you're probably the person closest to making Amy and Sonic believeable for me, and I still can't honestly stand it. I think I already gave the rant about how Amy will always seem like a minor and just a weird puppylove crush, disturbing to think of reciprocation. But I suppose its a lot because she's just the opposite of any kind of character I can stand or like, impulsive, emotional and clingy(mostly helpless too). Anyway, Chaotix are cool, always loved them since I bought the 32x to play the game <3, but other than that this chapter is evil @_@;;! Before I get into more of another sonadow rant, I'll comment on Rouge and Knuckles, yeah you made them fairly likeable, I'm not really sure she'd be quite this taken or determined to go after him though. Her scheme was complicated... but damn she's selfish, made for some very complex confusion though~. Okay, anyway, wow Sonic is so easily swayed. But its true, people do this when a person they found themselves in love with or whatever and things go wrong between them, they go for basically anyone interested in them in a way. Starts noticeing all these "nice things" about her all of a sudden and decides he likes her. Unfair to Amy however, since its desperation of sorts, but with her hopeless hero worship she'd probably take it anyway she got it. Other problem is that if they did get together it wouldn't last that long because they aren't equals. Amy has an endless hero worship for him, too much idolizing takes things out of perspective and makes things difficult after a time.
Oh and the ring around Sonic's neck makes him evil or something o_o;. Anyway, keep up the update-yness~!
person Popcorn Oracle
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
(I love it when my reviews get cut off -_-).but other than that this chapter is evil @_@;;! Before I get into more of another sonadow rant, I'll comment on Rouge and Knuckles, yeah you made them fairly likeable, I'm not really sure she'd be quite this taken or determined to go after him though. Her scheme was complicated... but damn she's selfish, made for some very complex confusion though~. Okay, anyway, wow Sonic is so easily swayed. But its true, people do this when a person they found themselves in love with or whatever and things go wrong between them, they go for basically anyone interested in them in a way. Starts noticeing all these "nice things" about her all of a sudden and decides he likes her. Unfair to Amy however, since its desperation of sorts, but with her hopeless hero worship she'd probably take it anyway she got it. Other problem is that if they did get together it wouldn't last that long because they aren't equals. Amy has an endless hero worship for him, too much idolizing takes things out of perspective and makes things difficult after a time.
Oh and the ring around Sonic's neck makes him evil or something o_o;. Anyway, keep up the update-yness~!
person Draconis
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do I even need to say it?
person Anon
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice.
person Xiander_s
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Shit, I just got an idea! Can I make a suggestion? Make this a three way! No I'm serious as hell! You can just have Sonic sleep with both of them and they can just be a trio! See that way everyoen wins and we won't have to argue about who ends up with who anymore cause this is startin to bother me now. I hate when I get this interested in a story. It's rotting my brain.

Nice work so keep it comin.
person ???????
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Make is Amy and Sonic. Just to piss everyone off.