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OMG, I will hit you Kamirine! Don't DO this to me! Damn you Kamirine! DAMN YOOOOOOOOOOU!

Okay I'll stop but you seriously better update this and I mean ASAP. You can't just stop RIGHT there! That's not fair! I want to know what's up with the last part! And I really want to know what happens with Amy and Shadow! Please update like soon, PLEASE!!!!!

And lmao! Another great and funny chapter!

Now UPDATE!

HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!

This story is just amazing! It has kept me on the edge of my seat!!!

This has got to be the best god damn fic I've read on this site.

I'm gonna keep my eye on this one...

AMY AND SONC!!!!!!1111 PLEAZE MAKE IT AMY AND SONIC CUZ THAT WUD SUK IF ITZ SHADOW SONIC CUZ THAT GROSS!

Quite an interesting read. I'll admit, it took me a while to get over the fact that you had depicted one of my favorite Sonic characters as a closet homosexual; nonetheless, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story (so far). Aside from the abundance of spelling and grammatical errors, I couldn't find anything about this story that was too inappropriate. The way you depict the characters is fairly accurate and the interaction between them is definitely on-point, in my opinion. You even managed to capture the essence of a true "Sonic-esque" environment, something that only a real Sonic fan can do. On many levels I was both impressed and appeased (always like reading a good story). If you think I'm just blowing smoke up your ass, think again. If this story sucked, I'd tell you. I definitely look forward to some exciting resolution in this bit of fan-fiction. Keep me in the loop as far as any updates go.

I'll write you a nice, long one so sit back and relax.

The only true problem I find is with the grammical/spelling errors. I don't see that many but they are there, just to let you know.

But everything else is perfect in my opinion.

By far, Shadow is my favorite character and I love how you dipict him in your fanfiction. I wasn't really sure, seeing as it was a Shadon story but I am thankful to you that you didn't make Shadow some overly fluff bunny like I've been seeing a lot of. I like that you have him slightly confused about his feelings and not really wanting to admit them to himself first before he actually goes after Sonic.
And having Amy go after Sonic as well and willing to fight for him (at least I hope) only makes the story that much more enjoyable. Because I couldn't see Amy backing down, considering how much she loves Sonic. So bravo so far on the love triangle.

I suppose the minor content that will be in the story must be with Cream and Tails. Simply, an adorable ship. Word of advice: just try to keep in mind that both Tails and Cream are a lot younger, so their *relationship* should be exactly the same: it shouldn't be as complexed as say Shadow and Sonic. Though nothing could be that complexed I suppose. But I believe you understand my advice.

Definately put in more Rouge and Knuckles. I'm thankful you didn't break up the Master Emerald and have them go chasing after the pieces like I've seen overly done in other fictions. But I love the way you dicit their relationship with one another.

I also like the fact that while this is a love story, or so I'm assuming, that you seem to like to give the reading the feeling of the Sonic games themselves. You stick to the group trying to find the chaos emeralds and you even make me wonder exactly what Eggman is planning to do with them. You even managed to put *bosses* in the game, in the way of them fighting Eggman's creations just to get the emeralds. That made me feel warm and fuzzy inside. I miss that in a lot of Sonic fictions. You can tell you're a true fan of the game at the very least.

I don't get the jelly joke but the part was still quite funny. Do you think you could provide a link? If you didn't mind? I'd love to see it.

In all, your story is funny while the characters are dead on. The fight scenes are enjoyable to read and the interaction and relationships between all the characters are enjoyable and believable. Though I'm still leering of Shadon, your story none the less, is a joy to read.

Do you email others to let them know when you update? If so, I'm morgondemi@yahoo.com. I'd love to continue reading your story.

Your story interests me.

I am looking foward to seeing how this little love triangle will play out between Son/Shad/Amy. I'll root for Amy and her Piko Hammer flying into the back of Shadow's head.

Personally, I'm in favor of Knuckles/Rouge myself and so far, I rather like how you have them in your story.

I find it funny and fun to read. I'll add it to my favorites so I can keep up with it.

Update please!

Peanut Butter, Jelly Time! Love that joke!

Anyway, great story. Lovin the Sonic and Shadow. We need some nice hot sex now though.

Since my review got erased:

Awesome fiction! I love that you write long chapters and the way your story is so detailed. Nice Family Guy reference by the way, gotta be one of the funniest moments on the show.

But I have to admit, I feel sorry for Amy now. She's not just going to give up is she? That would suck!

Update soon, this is great.