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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this is like one of the first times I reveiwed someone other then harley.. anyway its an awsome story. I love how all the characters seem to fall into there respective personalitys... im sure i probably should say more but i can never really seem to think of anything beyond my inital ispiration to revei wo this will have to do.. keep it up im looking forward to reading this.
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chappie. I'm hating that Sonic and Shadow are having a hard time right now though. I really want those two to stay together. Amy's sweet and all but please let Shadow win. And for the love of god if you put Shadow with Rouge...grrrrrrrr!
YOU NEED TO UPDATE ALREADY!
YOU NEED TO UPDATE ALREADY!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I haven't been here in a while. I'll have to add you to my favorites list so I can keep up with this story.
You've update a lot since I last read so I must say, it was a pleasent surprise for me.
To be honest now, I don't know what to think of your story anymore. You're very good at keeping a read on their toes because I just can't tell where this is going anymore. Not that this is a bad thing, but now I know not to jump to any more conclusions. You're also starting to focus on other charcters, which is something I've enjoyed in your latest chapter.
Though if you don't mind: could you please post of a link of the Peanut Butter Jelly thing? I'd really like to see it, if you do not mind.
I look forward to your next update, more over because I'd really like to see exactly how Rouge will fight Shadow into her plans.
Please update very soon!
You've update a lot since I last read so I must say, it was a pleasent surprise for me.
To be honest now, I don't know what to think of your story anymore. You're very good at keeping a read on their toes because I just can't tell where this is going anymore. Not that this is a bad thing, but now I know not to jump to any more conclusions. You're also starting to focus on other charcters, which is something I've enjoyed in your latest chapter.
Though if you don't mind: could you please post of a link of the Peanut Butter Jelly thing? I'd really like to see it, if you do not mind.
I look forward to your next update, more over because I'd really like to see exactly how Rouge will fight Shadow into her plans.
Please update very soon!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is late but, whateva.
Me lovey chappie! Rouge was great, I loved how she compared love to chess. So what is she gonna do next? What does she have in plan for Shadow? How is she gonna use Sonic? When is the next sex scene?????????????
I want more! Update!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Me lovey chappie! Rouge was great, I loved how she compared love to chess. So what is she gonna do next? What does she have in plan for Shadow? How is she gonna use Sonic? When is the next sex scene?????????????
I want more! Update!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Happy you finally updated! Hope you're feelin better too.
Another great chapter, though now you've raised more questions than answers. But then again, you like to play with our minds don't you? And you better NOT be making this a Sonic/Amy fanfiction, so help me! It's Shadow/Sonic all the way baby, ALL THE WAY!
Another great chapter, though now you've raised more questions than answers. But then again, you like to play with our minds don't you? And you better NOT be making this a Sonic/Amy fanfiction, so help me! It's Shadow/Sonic all the way baby, ALL THE WAY!
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's been a while friend. I'll start first by saying I hope you're feeling better and that you get completely well soon.
Now onward to reviewing your latest chapter.
I find that it was interesting for many different reasons. There wasn't as much humor as previous chapters for starters. I also noticed that Shadow was not present this chapter. This made me quite sad, as I've found that I rather look forward to Shadow in your story. As a budding Shadow/Sonic fan, I also noticed your attempts at placing more context clues towards the Amy/Sonic pairing. While the moments were cute, I must say that I was quite alarmed, as I'm really looking forward to this being a Shadow/Sonic story. The interaction between the two is always fun to read about and I'd hate to see it go sour.
After the last chapter, I was half excecting Amy to protest when Rouge offered to let Shadow join them in the fun towards the end and I must say, I was rather happy to see she did not. It gives me the further belief that you weren't trying to go out of character with Amy at all.
As for Rouge, this has sparked a new interest in reading your story. I partially understand what she's attempting to do--and in a since, I can't figure out exactly what it is that she will do. Or how exactly Sonic could possibly fit into it anymore. I also noticed that mentioned an upcoming reencouter with Eggman, so maybe we'll find out what exactly his plans are? I'm still curious about that. I also loved that this was told from Rouge point of view. You haven't completely made her to be the cliche' bitch like in other fanfictions but I can tell she's going down the road to doing something the characters may or may not regret. I look foward to seeing exactly what she's going to do.
I'm sure the Amy/Sonic fans will be happy with the development in this chapter but I for one, hope you continue with Shadow and Sonic. You actually did the odd task of making the ship believable without having to take either chapter completely out of charater or going the cliche' path of so many stories involving the pairing and I'd really like to see it work itself out.
All and all, another great chapter, though the Amy/Sonic and lack of humor does scare me. I look forward to reading more.
Now onward to reviewing your latest chapter.
I find that it was interesting for many different reasons. There wasn't as much humor as previous chapters for starters. I also noticed that Shadow was not present this chapter. This made me quite sad, as I've found that I rather look forward to Shadow in your story. As a budding Shadow/Sonic fan, I also noticed your attempts at placing more context clues towards the Amy/Sonic pairing. While the moments were cute, I must say that I was quite alarmed, as I'm really looking forward to this being a Shadow/Sonic story. The interaction between the two is always fun to read about and I'd hate to see it go sour.
After the last chapter, I was half excecting Amy to protest when Rouge offered to let Shadow join them in the fun towards the end and I must say, I was rather happy to see she did not. It gives me the further belief that you weren't trying to go out of character with Amy at all.
As for Rouge, this has sparked a new interest in reading your story. I partially understand what she's attempting to do--and in a since, I can't figure out exactly what it is that she will do. Or how exactly Sonic could possibly fit into it anymore. I also noticed that mentioned an upcoming reencouter with Eggman, so maybe we'll find out what exactly his plans are? I'm still curious about that. I also loved that this was told from Rouge point of view. You haven't completely made her to be the cliche' bitch like in other fanfictions but I can tell she's going down the road to doing something the characters may or may not regret. I look foward to seeing exactly what she's going to do.
I'm sure the Amy/Sonic fans will be happy with the development in this chapter but I for one, hope you continue with Shadow and Sonic. You actually did the odd task of making the ship believable without having to take either chapter completely out of charater or going the cliche' path of so many stories involving the pairing and I'd really like to see it work itself out.
All and all, another great chapter, though the Amy/Sonic and lack of humor does scare me. I look forward to reading more.
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
About time! LMAO, now let me just go read it...
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jeez, just how long is the chapter Kamirine? We need an update!
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Remember me?
Ah, I see you deleted your Harry Potter story. Sadness has filled my heart because I liked it. But I decided to start reading this one to pass the time and I gotta say, it's really great! Love it so far but:
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.
Where's the update? As in, you know, RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!11 Cause I've noting you haven't updated in a while. And you know, you should.
Okay bye!
Ah, I see you deleted your Harry Potter story. Sadness has filled my heart because I liked it. But I decided to start reading this one to pass the time and I gotta say, it's really great! Love it so far but:
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.
Where's the update? As in, you know, RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!11 Cause I've noting you haven't updated in a while. And you know, you should.
Okay bye!
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Evil! Your so evil @@;;. This chapter totally had equal share of Sonadow and Amy stuff; ;. Especially that little kiss thingie in the bedroom x.x. It seems like Sonic is at least physically attracted to Shadow for sure. I dunno, he seems very uncertain about Amy, and has much more reason to go with Shadow. Gahh. Anyway, awesome charatcerizations as always^^v, you seriously make me want to go back and play Sonic Adventure 2 now, and I'm not even that crazy about the new games. Man, cliffy, evil evil ._.;, at least you update fast <3, cant wait for the next @@;. (rooting for shadow, obviously ~~;).